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What Nursing Taught Me About Life And Death by Natalie Hallworth (1) "Dear Natalie, Thank you for sharing your Nursing Experiences. I alway wanted to do Nursing BUT l took a different part and chose another career. BUT l also looked after my Sick mother, hence during her last few years of her life l became her carer. I landed up looking after my sick mother as well as other Old people in a residential Home, (most of who have now passed away. There was a very sweet old lady of 95 years of age who had dementer. It was so sad to see old people in Residentail homes. If l was not with my mother God knows what she would have felt about me during her last days. I found my mother dead in her bed the next morning. But when my mother was alive she would always thank the Nurses in whatever they did, She always knew that people like you are human beinging too - Nurses are truelly Angels. At the time when l used to consider taking Nursing after leaving school 1974, l never thought about the other side - that is also having to deal with death. You really have to have a very strong mind to handle these situations and you and your colleagues are doing a wonderful job. God Bless all the Nurses. " -- Amy, Hayes, Middlesex, UK. Truth by Adele Staufer (1) "You are so lucky to have had the best memories of your child hood. Reading your work was beautiful, where does one see lemon trees etc in this heavily polluted Britain. (I am in my 50's and l still remember my granfathers house - l haven'[t see another house like it - it was beautiful and tree lined where we spend our summer days playing. Beautiful memories are impended in the heart." -- Amy, Hayes, UK. Oh Australia, How I Hate Thee by Thepratmeister (7) "Ah yes, once again, the ignorance." -- Hugh. "Ahhh, I thought it was funny, but then again I don't live in Australia" -- kwilt. 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Sure forgetting the pain of life is good, but I know it will catch up with me some day and drag me down. I used to be a really energetic person, a person with ideas and motivation, with a good crowd of friends and a loving family. Once I began weed 5 yrs ago, I slowly began to shed my friends who werent into weed smoking; I guess I thought it was cool, and I was somehow above them for doing it... I dunno. But over the last 4 yrs I have lost all my friends except those who do pot. And the friends I have now, I have good deep relationships with despite we are only really weed buddies. I like your story, it triggers the thought of putting myself through counselling to deal with these problems. However, I know I won't.. My motivation has completley evaporated and I cannot seem to deal with stuff. I can't explain how lazy my life has become since weed gripped me. Getting high is very overated, sure it was fun when I started with all the fun accesories and parties but now the parties have gone and the accessories are not needed. I'm at work right now, high, I skin up 2-3 a night, when I finish I will skin up another 2 and go to sleep. Hi my name's Sasu and I have a problem! Weed. I loved your description of what your going through, I think you have done really well stopping, and continuing to stop, I hope that you can come out the other side a new person thanks to your courage and honesty. Thanks for sharing this." -- Sasu. "Does handicapper omaha weak online free bingo! " -- bingo, bingo, bingo, bingo. "Rose, this is wonderful. Wherever you are I miss you every day. Rest in peace beautiful girl." -- Jenn. Vitry-Sur-Seine Half-Marathon - April 23, 2006 by Terry Kaufman (1) "Choose speek ragged 888 casino? " -- 888, 888, 888, 888. Purge - Goodbye by Briony Carvalho (9) "This kept sending shivers down my spine when reading it. 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Thats the way to climb to the top as you struggle your way through your half backed attempt at legal studies, only to realise you are too stupid, and end up licking envelopes in the mail room at the sunday mail as you realise it is the only thing you can actually do, and do well. Lick fucking balls!! The world has truley gone to the fucking shit house. The government just want us all to be up to our balls in debt, sign an Australian Workplace Agreement, and then bend over and get reamed week in week out for a fucking pathetic minimal wage. Then you wont have time to build relationships with any one, regardless of their age, as you will be too busy working your balls of earning minimal wage. Fuck the beurocrats, fuck the government, fuck all you prudes out there and most of all FUCK NICOLE CORNES UP THE ASS WITH THE ROUGH END OF A PINAPPLE, YOU FUCKING TOOTHLESS MOLE." -- Jimmy, Adelaide, South Australia, Australia. 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