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Claustrum Chap. 1 by Mathew Hamm (1) "love stories" -- jyoti, delhi, delhi, india. Jade (Chapter One) by Chloe L Batey (2) "Intriguing beginning. I didn't find any mistakes, but then I wasn't looking for any. The story caught my attention and held it, and so I have to say: Excellent work!" -- Moonstar (Saber). "Thanks Moonstar! " -- Chloe. Who Loves And Who Hates by Alayande Usman Alayandefeelma (1) "Great story" -- Thea Paula , Cebu, Cebu city , Philipines. Psyche Transfixed (First 4 Chapters) by Moonstar Saber (1) "I'm really like what you have posted of Psyche Transfixed. The world you've created is so neat and believable. The ratings such as Imperial for Seers was fascinating, as was the fact that most Seers were wiped out in a famine and how they're treated badly by the others of the underground. The storyline is really interesting so far and you've got me as a reader asking lots of questions. What did Matt stop the demons from doing? How strong is Matt as a Seer? I'm really curious about Will and his partner Dixie as well as the woman Will has just 'met'. Will as a character is really refreshing, usually male protagonists are dramatically strong characters. It's nice that Will isn't some professional fighter with an extremely high pain tolerance, more like an average guy who enjoys the simple stuff where he can. He's someone you can relate to and you really feel sympathetic towards his situation. One suggestion I have that, in my opinion, would improve your story is explaining or giving more detail about Will's surroundings. His home was an apartment and it sort of threw me when he started throwing a ball for Pie (wonderful and creative name by the way) out the front door because I pictured an apartment building. The different rooms in Dixie's house could have been clearer also. Overall great story and I hope I'll be able to read more. If you do get more up or want to reply to my review feel free to email me at [email protected] . " -- Kam. Pael The Necromancer by Ettina Satot (1) "This. Is. Amazing!!!! The character of Pael is interesting and the narrator is unique. I do enjoy your writing style--it's different than I normally see. This is an excellent story and I shall return for more when more is posted. Keep up the great work!" -- Moonstar. Half-Vampire by Ettina Satot (1) "This is also intruging. Your stories are fascinating to me. Excellent work!" -- Moonstar. Forever Us (Chapter One.) by S M Kivela (1) "Wow - must admit that I did think - uh oh more teen fiction but when I started reading it I was gripped - please write more! One minor criticism is to check how many times you remind the reader of the abandoned mother (the sentence about '...if you'd forgotten') might be seen as repetetive. Apart from that it's excellently written, gripping and grabs your attention from the start!" -- Briony. Hot & Horrifying: The First Ladies Of Horror by Iron Dave (1) "verey good" -- Munir, Aden, Aden, yemen. The Psychic Stalker Chap 2 by Silma Subah (1) "reli cooolll...i cant wait fr the next chapter...pls be quickkkkkkk" -- sumaia, doha, doha, QATAR. When Your Best Friends Brother Is Beautiful, Sleepovers Are So Much More Fun Ch 1 by Bee Duere Morris (5) "you plagiarized this from complacent (from quizilla)!!! take it off the site and apologize to the author!!!!!!" -- cza. "I wrote this story. You should take it off. There's nothing more annoying than seeing someone take credit for something they didn't do." -- Kendall. "OMGG!!i have read this story in quizilla!..please dnt plagiarize ppls stuff!" -- Silma. "You are so dumb for thinking that noone would understand that you plagiarized this story as well as some others! Take it off of here and if you don't feel just a tab bit guilty then you are a horrible peson ;( ;( :/" -- Yo-Yo. "OMG U PLAGERIZED THIS U LOSER! FAIL!" -- lucille bennet. When Yor Best Friends Brothers Beautiful... Chp 3 by Bee Duere Morris (2) "this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!!this isn't your story!!! you plagiarized ths from QUIZILLA!" -- ScrewYou. "Yeah,I dont think thats your story...If it's not,you are a terrible person and you shall go to hell.Seriously" -- HatePlagiarizers, Paris, France. Drinking Death by Stephanie A C Ann (1) "I need the whole story" -- Peter, Sydney, NSW, Australia. The Night World- Black Dawn Chapter 1 by Annabelle Elizabeth Rae Summers (1) "I love it, when are you writing your next chapter? I loved the way you began the story, the details...i am wondering why the her socks will be part of her salvation in the future?? " -- katerine santana, bronx, new york, US. Hey Romeo, Don't You Think Your Just A Tad Overrated? by Annabelle Elizabeth Rae Summers (7) "Oh, hey, wonderful story. Too bad YOU STOLE IT FROM A DIFFERENT WEBSITE! YOU DIDN'T EVEN ASK! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST PLAGERIZE SOMEONE ELSES STORY!?" -- Ruby. "Wow! I actually thought this way pretty good! That is so wrong! Someone did that to me on quizilla!" -- Bee Morris. "i have read this on quizilla it is amazing. yes. but you stole it and now she doesnt know if she is going to continue. which makes me upset. its worng to steal peoples work. hope you feel good about yourself. -sophie" -- sophie. "Hey!..Yhis story is one of my favs and oyu have absolutely no right to steal it just lyk that!..create ur own stuff!..dnt plagiarize!plagiarizing is like stealing and stealin gis ILLEGAL!...and now the real writer of the story is in doubt wether she is ever going to continue!..:(..this is real bad!" -- Silma. "this isn't your story!!! you should take it off this site and apologize to the author!" -- ScrewYou. "I have read this somewhere and I know you are not eh writer. This is a fairly good story, though I think it could use a bit more detail. It is wrong you plagiarized this story, making it your own when you never asked if you could use it. However, you should take it off IMMEDIATELY and apologize properly to the owner." -- Cheyenne. "You thief, what makes you think you can do this? There is over 50 people who reposted this story as their own, it was written by Complacent on quizilla.com. Burn in hell. ~anon" -- anonymous. Hey Romeo, Chapter 2- All Hot Guys Have Anger Managment... by Annabelle Elizabeth Rae Summers (4) "It's Chapter two of A stolen story!! Yaaay! NOT! I suggest you stop stealing someone elses story and write your own." -- RandomPerson. "Um. THIS ISNT YOUR STORY" -- Hi. "this isn't your story!!! this isn't your story!!! this isn't your story!!!" -- ScrewYou. "This is not this person's story. She obviously plagiarized it. Honestly, this person is so low...it's an insult to read this from her profile. I advise you, Annabelle, not to plagiarize." -- wow.. Diary Of Lily The Sleeping Princess by Latina Torrence (3) "Very Nice I like it reminds me of a struggle between someone and their world." -- Peak, USA. "its fantastic, nice reading it" -- patience, Lagos, Lagos, Nigeria. "Great story. I enjoyed reading it :)" -- Thea Paula , Lapu-lapu city , Cebu city, Philipines. Tight Jeans (4) by Randall Barfield (1) "That's cool - it's better than c.c.t.v footage. Women." -- mat. Pen Of Iniquity by Deno Sandz (2) "This sounds like a really cool book. I'm not 100% sure that i see where the connection between Derrick Samuel and Daniel Gordon is, but i'm sure that it is going to be a really interesting book!" -- Philomena D. Gavod, Alberta, Canada. "I think this will be a very suspenful novel. The only thing is Daniel Gordon gets murdured becasue of his connections with the outside world?? As of now it does not sound very convincing. I gues, I will have to wait for the book. " -- katerine santana, bronx, new york, united states. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 |
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