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Break Up by Iveth Jaramillo (1)
"i looked at it and went back, waste of time." -- rs, DC.


Tender (An Ode To My Obsession) by Brian Varitek (1)
"talks of love, yet lusts after the woman...immature stuff." -- rs.


I Ask For Your Forgiveness by The Doctor's Pet Lunatic (2)
"Man, ur stuff gives me gooesbumps, u r great!!" -- Butaflie Works.
"Very good ... I have a 'taste' for vampires, as well ... you should check out some of my poems, as well as those of R Bennett Okerstrom ... I think you will find them to your liking" -- Judith Goff.


Lunatic Prometheus - Reprised by The Doctor's Pet Lunatic (1)
"I like the original better. But they're both really interesting. I notice that everything is dated 2000-do you still write?" -- Tami Lynn, Bossier City, LA, USA.


The Master by Fizzgig McArthur (5)
"Crap Crap Crap. What were you thinking" -- Fizzgig Mcarthur, Wauwatosa , WI, USA.
"You did a good job with the rhyming. Good poem, but kind of gloomy." -- Ashley.
"I hate this poem could somebody take it off? " -- Fizzgig Mcarthur.
"Yeah, you're right, this poem blows. Get this offa here!" -- Eric P. Vana, Milwaukee, WI, USA.
"Dang Jesse....this poem fucking sucks. Come to my house this weekend and I'll show you how to write poetry, with my tongue on your body." -- Michelle.


Lover's Thoughts by Fizzgig McArthur (1)
"This poem sounds very optimistic :o)" -- Michelle Worswick.


Apples Of Gold by John Mark Boyd (2)
"Heart and Soul.... This Poet touched me deeply.... He took me to places where I've been, and has given me a glimpse of where I could go... Excellent writing..." -- Rita Fimbres.
"This poet has a way with words that no other poet has. Altough he is an amateur, he deserves the recognition that published auhors enjoy. I hope to see his poems in a book some day. I for one would be happy to own a copy of his great collection. Vivid and imaginative!! Worthy of publication." -- Johnny.


I Lost My... by Alejandro Dubois Arrese (3)
"That was so dumb." -- Meg.
"You had a good idea, but it seemed you had trouble getting it out. Nice job!" -- Me.
"thats a good poem. read my novel it relates tot he poem you wrote." -- lori, ny, usa, ny.


Be by Iveth Jaramillo (1)
"you have a good point, but it isn't very good, no imagery, uninteresting." -- tyu.


Speachless by Stephanie Gomez (1)
"WOW!! I feel like some1 finally understands me, u rock!! Keep up the great work, check out some of my stuff and tell me what u think, I'd love feedback from a great poet like u!!" -- Butaflie Works.


One by Stephanie Gomez (1)
"Iwas taken by "speechless' and this is great 2!!" -- Butaflie Works.


A Letter To Santa by Juanita Grillo Diez (1)
"Hey, this is really cute, U have potentiel, keep writing, check out some of my stuff!!" -- Butaflie Works.


No! by Alberto Cardozo (3)
"*Stands up amidst the roaring applause and joins in on the ovation*" -- Tyrant.
"Although I find the rhyming a little annoying, I realize what you are trying to say. Sometimes understanding people's poems can be hard. So, I applaud you on making sense of your thoughts. --- Jennifer" -- Jennifer, Baton Rouge, Louisiana, USA.
"will you ever grow up? NO! should teenagers be allowed to publish? NO! your rhyme and metric are shallow and the content is basic. come back in 5 or 6 years" -- isledar kay.


You (2) by Marcela Posada (2)
"I found your work to be very touching and honest. The honesty in your words shows the meaning in your heart." -- M. Daddona, W. Nyack, New York, U.S.A..
"Poignant and revealing..." -- Camryn Chase, Windsor, NS, Canada.


I Hate You, But I Still Love You by Maria Mercedes Restrepo (1)
"Perfect poem. I just broke up with my long time boyfriend and this fits exactly how I feel. I hate him, but I love him." -- Lydia Banks, Eau Claire, Wisconsin, USA.


To My Love by Kristen Antia (3)
"You write much older than a 13 year old...It's a very special poem! Keep up the good work..." -- RHONDA DEPIETTO OCASIO, CENTRAL ISLIP, NY, USA.
"13? Doesn't look like it. You have great English as well!" -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"This poem is very basic and has been written probably hundreds of times. That's not bad, though. It shows that you are thinking along the lines of a lot of other writers. I would like to see something more personal, more creative. It's clear that you write well and may have talent. Let's see it. And remember that you are a youngster....you have 80 or so years ahead of you to write...plenty of time to wow the world with your words." -- Innagroove.


Push In Your Chair When You Leave by Adam P. Elkins (2)
"This is poetry. Crisp, fresh and clean. I like it." -- Tamara Dorris, Sacramento, CA, USA.
"like all poet that seems to imerge to consciousness it is hard to decypher- am i being too analithicall?- but i was able to follow behind the verese�s path- now who�s being hermetic!. i would like to read more from you." -- iseldar kay.


Splashes Of Gray Paint On Dirty White Cloth by Abigail I Copuyoc (2)
"go abi!!! " -- nina, qc, manila, philippines.
"amazing." -- yolanda, long beach, california, usa.


Why Them? by Alejandra Herrera (1)
"I thought your poem was really sesnsitive. The way you expressed your views onto paper is incredible i really like your use of rhetorical questions." -- Robyn Carlson, Taplow, Maidenhead, England.


Thoughts From A Prison Camp by Mason Cole (4)
"This is absolutely great - I love, especially the form which I've never seen before. It's clever, meaningful, wonderfully expressed. I really admire this poem - congratulations to the author on a brilliant piece." -- Kerry L. Schofield , Midlands, England.
"This seemed very deep and from your heart. What poetry is really supposed to be...it's not always rhymes that are important..." -- Ashley.
"Are you sure you're only 17? Deep, emotional, and yet written with brains, not just the heart. Good work!" -- Ivana Milakovic.
"you should read 'night' by Elie Weisel. I've got to think on this more." -- olef ransom saulles.


Grandfather by Mason Cole (2)
"Very sad and very powerful. My commendations to Worthing on an excellent piece." -- Jack Filantio, in Al buquerque, NM, USA.
"Much "better" than your previous piece. Both show the raw material of a poetic gift,the difference is important.It is one thing to be empathetic with a prisoner, and another thing to experience the pain of seeing someone you love locked away in the ultimate gulag of dementia. Howl at the injustice of both, that's what youth is for,but remember that poetry is at its best when it is torn from broken hearts, or joyously crowed from pinnacles. It is a craft that improves with practice,and is best appreciated by those who know what it feels like to be unable to NOT write it. " -- Feather, Columbus, Ohio, usa.


No Ties That Bind by Dustin L Engelbrecht (8)
"A very confusing poem which could be looked at in many different angles. Who is this person asking the questions?Is he a man of little hope or a man of little fear? An amzing read." -- Robyn Carlson, Taplow, Maidenhead, England.
"Good piece which can be taken a number of ways. I like this very much. ~ From an old friend :) " -- Kristi , Sioux Falls , SD, USA.
"i think this writing hides a mich deeper sadness than is let on.even n underlying anger at the world in general.i suppose you can take it several different ways but i think of despare.i would LOVE to know more about this author please e mail me with any more information.it would mean a lot." -- natasha, jefferson, united states., sd.
"this poem is even more haunting considering some recent events.i would love to hear from KRISTY or anybody else that may know this author.it really would be nice." -- natasha, jefferson, SD, US.
"I think this poem said it all for the author. I knew him and understand it, but wish I would have read it before he passed away because now he is gone and and has left two many loose ends. He will forever be missed!" -- Heather, North Sioux City, SD, USA.
"Heather is right this poem says it all for this aurthor, i knew him and understood everything he wrote, He will be missed always and loved forever. RIP my friend the hurt is over." -- Jessica, North Sioux City, SD, US.
"I just felt I need to contribute here having been the author's confidante and partner the last four years. This poem was written many years ago but it rang true up until his passing. But it did not define all of who he was. Even amidst pain and struggle he shed a light on all around him. He was wise beyond his years, generous, and kind. The world and the hearts of those that loved him have lost a precious soul. Love you always." -- Rae, IA, USA.
"I is hard to say in words that other people that didnt know Dustin would understand. Know this he was a friend, and coworker for 3 years. Wise beyond his years was a true statement. I will miss my friend, and he was my brother. The world is now a lessor place without Dustin! All of his friends will truly miss him! PEACE AND LOVE BE WITH ALL HIS FAMILY!" -- James O, Omaha, NE, USA.


Hands by The Doctor's Pet Lunatic (2)
"I just noticed poor old Pet has no reviews :( so here's the first - I really love this poem, the expression's beautiful and it's got nice subtlety. Kudos from one eccentric to another: With the recent passing of Spike Milligan, the world's maddest genius, our days are numbered. Flaunt it, Pet. Mate, you got a gift for poetry." -- S.J. Fletcher, Sydney, Australia.
"WOW!! U r the best, I'm so in love with this poem, U sort of remind me of me, Read my poems "Disclosed Happiness" and "flexible pain" u'll find we have very similar views and thoughts, can't wait till u review mine!!" -- Butaflie Works.


Poems by Sunny (5)
""at lunch forever i sit and stare." Yeah...too smart for your own good. When you're gonna make a statement as arrogant as that, better have something to back it up." -- Tyrant.
"what's arrogant about 'sitting and staring at lunch'? everybody does that, don't you. hmmm, this criticism didn't help me much, tyrant you dumbass, and to think i like your fruity shit." -- sunny, DC.
" I think this poetry is well written - and not only because you liked my 'Queen-Dom' story!" -- Christine.
"I like your writings they are strange and different but thats what I love most about them. I really hope to read more of your work. ::smile::" -- E Daugherty.
"you are a very creative writer!!" -- tabatha, lagrange, IN, USA.


Wilberforce's Young Whale by William John Velek (1)
"Your first poem? Are you sure? Your words and the flow reflect the skill and work of a craftsman! Your lines keep in perfect time! I have never read anything so great done by a first time poet. Please come back and post something else! I look forward to reading it. And get published! The above work is good enough! :)" -- Ashley Burdett.


Watch The World Bleed by Joe Greenthumb (1)
"I like the idea Joe but there are a couple of lines that do not scan. Also I noticed that to begin with the first 2 lines of a stanza were given to the activist and the last to the bloody-minded everyday man but that seems to change as the poem progresses. Perhaps this was, after all, your intention to suggest chaos?" -- Martin Milner, Freehold, NJ, USA.


The Battle by Matthew T. Strouse (2)
"Wow, you were a Vetran in the ARMY? Me, I was only a veteran and the regular old army...you must have been good to have had the E omitted and your corps capitalized. Oh...maybe I should read the story. A real review shall be up in a minute." -- Tyrant.
"Upon reading, it occurs to me that you strained yourself and forced in every rhyme you could. Of course, I'll assume you were sick and delusional in the service, malaria or some such other third world disease fogging your brain, as you misspelled Parry a number of times and overall spewed out a forgetable poem chock full of craptacularness." -- Tyrant.


Runner's High by Jessica Barker (3)
"But no one cares." -- Meg.
"I have to say, Jessica...out of the hundred times this poem has been written, you capture PERFECTLY the fickle monotony of it. Congratulations on a poem which singlehandedly ruined the "Runner's High" genre. *Commences fruity golf clap*" -- Tyrant.
"love cheerleader" -- chrislor, florida.


Seasons Of Love, A Collection by Jessica Barker (2)
"hahahahahahahahhahaha! you started it out with MUM! that was worth reading through the whole crappy thing!" -- Meg.
"Hehe...killing mum...I *hate* when that happens." -- Lyle Menendez.


Hidden Value by Steve Barney (3)
"That happened to me once, so I shot him." -- Ricky Martin.
"I, too, believe in "listening to the silence". Well put." -- Lizzy, Wisconsin.
"strange as it may seem, after much time devoted to thought , one can find that something so simple as silence can be so rich and powerful, but it is. send more letters as you travel further into it." -- iseldar kay.


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