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The F A L L by Mia Angello (4)
"this is a wonderful poem of a hurt relationship...the visuals abound..."dance in life's happy circles, from pile to the next--unaware of the compost below" is beyond words! " -- e. rocco caldwell.
"painful event leading to a truly good poem. " -- just a guy.
"Beautiful, not a happy subject but your words and heart made it beautiful." -- Moses M. Constable.
"Its some very powerful words. You have a great gift." -- Kristopher Van Styn, madison, WI, United States.


A Place Of Her Own by Dri Cook (4)
"The Caterpillar hides in a private cocoon for a for a while... to emerge as a butterfly who flies, making everyone smile " -- Brian O Neil.
"Aww very nice. Does the rose represent individualism?" -- ryan severud.
"thank you both, Brian and Ryan, again, your feedback is always very welcome. No, Ryan, the rose does not represent individualism. In fact, I chose the rose because to me, it is the most beautiful and fragile flower ever and yet, so very strong despite the thorns (trials). In fact it is a strong methapore. In this case, I am the rose for facing so many trials in my life (thorns) and always having to fight back in order to survive. Did I answer your question?" -- Dri.
"Yes you did. I get it now. Thanks! Very nicely done. " -- ryan severud.


My Sweet by Dri Cook (1)
"maybe you're right. we may never enjoy heaven as it is if we never know hell. Like, we could relly learn fron mistakes and turn into a better person" -- Akira NJ.


U.S.A. Let's Fall In Love Again! by Dri Cook (4)
"fine tribute to a fine nation..." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Hello Dri...I have read your review of my piece, Friendship,Oblivion and decided to take a look at your piece. I think it is great! A fantastic piece about this great land of ours. Are you returning here in the future? " -- Jeffrey.
"thank you both, Rocco and Jeffrey. Yes, Jeffrey, I will return, hopefully!" -- Dri.
"Well, one can only hope it will be sooner than later! " -- Jeffrey.


The Only Gods by Brion' O Neil (6)
"what happened that all the feedbacks are gone???? What did you do? " -- Dri, Sao Paulo, Brazil.
"The Gods came back from vacation with a clean slate." -- Brian O Neil.
"You know, I honestly don't get it but I really, really want to." -- Kavya.
"The Gods are disappointed that you don't know them, let me give you a hint...Trinity. Now do you know The Only Gods a little better? " -- Brian O Neil.
"Ok, the trinity. Now it makes more sense." -- Kavya.
"they are the Bible itself!" -- Dri.


Wind Song by Hayley Burdett (2)
"Nice, you've painted a vivid picture" -- Kavya.
"Wind Song stays on my...windsong stays on my mind." -- Harry.


Why Don't We by Just A Guy (2)
"This is a very good one. keeps it up!" -- Akira NJ.
"Ok I absolutely adore the poem until the "everything pales in comparison" cause it's such cliche...and the rest had my heart racing because of the depth and sincerity of your love. If i had written it..i'd end it at "they dont shine so bright."" -- mia angello, WI.


Who Is She ? by Vinod Sasidharan (6)
"I'm not sure if this poem is supposed to have some religious implications or if it is the product of some sick mind. I'm guessing it has some religious overtones, however. " -- Steven.
"Hi steve, This is about our mother and what religious you find in it . what is sick in it .. dont you have a mother ???" -- vinod.
"Great piece on a mother . Steves reply is against a Mother . what is religious in a mother . what is sick in a mother . Steve mind your words mac " -- maca john.
"gosh, nothing wrong with this poem. Hey, Steve, why is that?? " -- Dri.
"Nothing really, don't read in to it. I regretted the comment as soon as I posted it, sorry" -- Steven.
"Mothers who make chicken pickle and try to make their son's living a little easier should be honored and loved. I think this is what the author is trying to convey to the reader." -- Seth, San Diego, CA.


Whisky And Soda by Hayley Burdett (1)
"This was very well done, not what I expected but i really enjoyed this piece of art." -- Moses M. Constable.


West Virginia by Hayley Burdett (1)
"this is a glass of fine aged wine...I can savor over it for some time to come...very well done!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Unclear Explanation by Skyler Drevan (5)
"my, I like the end.........you're smart:-)" -- Dri.
"Thanks so much, Dri! " -- Jeffrey.
"The gullible ears we have... great piece." -- ryan severud.
"I thank you very much, Ryan for your comments. I also enjoy many of your pieces." -- Jeffrey.
"Wonderful! This is simply wonderful!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Two Little Birds by Dri Cook (2)
"GREAT!!! I really enjoyed this poem. I really liked how they were little cute birds, because they're trying so hard, but they had so many problems. Your poems never bore me, keep them coming, i know you will. Thank You. " -- Moses M. Constable.
"Hey, Mo, thanks and they will keep on coming, hopefully!" -- Dri.


Turmoil by Dri Cook (3)
"I can't stop reading your stuff, everyone discription attracts me to read it. It's definitely not a bad thing though, because i truly enjoy all your stuff. " -- Moses M. Constable.
"thanks, Mo!! Glad you enjoy my writings. Hope to always have new stuff here." -- Dri.
"Turmoil is really good stuff, my favorite one. keep writing, don't ever stop. " -- Roberto Balmant dos Santos, Berkeley, CA, USA, California, USA.


Title Less by E Rocco Caldwell (5)
"Haha you go homie! Very interesting and unique to the Mania...good to see you posting again." -- ryan severud.
"glad you liked it!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"true dat ;)" -- km.
"yes, it's nice having you back. " -- Dri.
"great work ERC, vivid pic of true life." -- just a guy.


Theology by Martin De Leon (2)
"this is handled very well. I liked this very much...The rusty whisper of white doors is a great line it put the visual of leaking brown water in my mind. The grains become as large as numb moons escaped a bit but the rest of it left me a question as to Theology...where or who or what is God? Nicely done..." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"The title did catch my attention but what the heck does it have to do with Theology?? Did I miss it? " -- Dri.


The Stigma Of A Race by E Rocco Caldwell (7)
"excellent reflection and imagery of the old fashioned prejudice of the south. Touch�' with the "baboon" lable...wonderful work. I lived there for 5 years and this seems to be "closet feelings" of many people, still today; with street names like "charring cross" and all the rebel flaggs a flying." -- Brian O Neil.
"Wow... very interesting. Hysteria followed by death. If I understood correctly. Gret work." -- ryan severud.
"interesting statement, Brian. I lived in the south many eyars ago during the Civil Rights movement and of coruse I was confronted with balant racism...recently I have been in the south and things seem more tolerant...but I like the points of streets holding horrible names and confederate flags flying everywhere...I'm still not sure if a confederate flags means you're a racist though. Thanks, Ryan and Brian for your reviews." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"I loved this piece, E. Rocco! It was a brilliant testimate to the horrible and shameless racism of the past." -- Jeffrey.
"Perhaps my "South" is not the same place you have visited...not to say there are not prejudices here...but I dare say there are those everywhere. No Confederate flag is attached to my porch (mine has butterflies)...but of those I know who have one it is not meant to racist...perhaps I have unwittingly been offended, not by the poem, but by the posted reviews...stigma of the "south"? I have no racial issues, no prejudices...as it is with most of my neighbors here in my "south"...we are all one in the eyes of God. " -- mattie.
"Mattie, I agree somewhat with you...the poem is about the South of the past not of today. I have great white friends and union brother and sisters in the South. I do think there's racism ther though but not as much as in the Past...thank God!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Rocco, Racism is alive and well today primarily because of people like yourself who are obsessed with recreating the past. I say this only because so many of your poems and essays are about racism. Get over it! You're preaching to your own select little choir. Try thinking of yourself as just an American. You don't have to constantly remind the whole world that your black. We(I)don't care. Maybe like so many others today, you're ashamed to be just an American. " -- Richard.


The Hunting Of The Snark by Nathaniel A Miller (1)
"I like this one too...I don't like a lot of mister Carroll but respect his ability...he's the man who gave us Alice!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


The Burden Of Sight by Rhiannon Price (3)
"this poem is very good! Your style is wonderful...I like have you use each word without waste...it is the key to good poetry!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Very interesting... The darkness and imagery is overwhelming. Keep it up." -- ryan severud.
"Probably the best title out of all 3 poems because unlike the commonly held opinion of sight being a gift you've perceived it as a burden, its very intriguing." -- Camilla.J.Way.


Tainted Poppy by Rhiannon Price (1)
"This is by far the best poem out of all of them. The ideology of the poppy being red with the blood and anger of men is very imaginative and effective. The last line outlines the whole poem: 'when did humanity die?' its such a simple rhetorical question yet what it is asking is very deep and meaningful. Excellent poem." -- Camilla.J.Way.


Sunset by Hayley Burdett (1)
"now here is a poem filled with visuals...ah....it is good!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Sunday Morning Drive By Shooting by Brotherman (2)
"Good pictures and emotion, and you rhyme too, what a combo. Ever try writting a song?" -- Brian O Neil.
"another good one, Brotherman!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Still She Lies by Erasmus Flynt (3)
"It's great to see a poem from you. It was really well done and dark and beautiful at the same time. You used some great words (that's where I think the beauty comes from). Great work. Thanks for your reviews." -- Moses M. Constable.
"A wicked tale you weave, Erasmus. Nicely done!" -- km.
"eerie...but desevring of a toast! Well done, Erasmus!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Star Light, Star Bright, It�S Christmas Night by Elizabeth Burnett (1)
"I like it, but I think you should save it for Christmas. What you think? It would grab more attention if you were to do it." -- Dri.


Star Gazing On An Electric Night by Hayley Burdett (1)
"The beginning could be formatted a little better but towards the middle I really began to like it. You paint the scenery beautifully. Great work." -- ryan severud.


Silent Nights, Lonely Nights, Just You And I! by Dri Cook (7)
"Wow the repetition in this peace was perfect. Great job on this one. I feel the same for my computer... always there for me to vent with :)" -- ryan severud.
"Good job! Packed with pictures and emotions." -- Brian O Neil.
"I like this style the most...very well done!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"thank you Rocco, Brian and Ryan. I think this is, indeed, my style." -- Dri.
"i must concur, this was a moving piece. i could almost see you gently stroking the thing. nice work dri." -- just a guy.
"Dri...I like this one a lot. It holds a lot of emotion and I really like the way it ends the way it begins. Nice work!!" -- km.
"You guys are right...I wrote it with tears in my eyes for so much emotion.....thank you so much! I guss it has become one of my favorite pieces so far." -- Dri.


Signs Of Morgantown by Hayley Burdett (1)
"Very interesting. I enjoyed it. *sarcasm* West Virginia seems like the place to be! Excellent work. And thnkas for the review." -- ryan severud.


Should Of by Brodie Hughes (1)
"Straight from the heart, this one. Well written and it builds the picture beautifully." -- Erasmus Flynt, UK.


Shadowy Depths Of Your Soul by Dri Cook (2)
"fragmented, but very, very sweet" -- Brotherman.
"Wow i really like how this one turned out... very to-the-point. Excellent work once again. "you deserve to be more, than a flickering, candle flame..." I really like that one :)" -- ryan severud.


Say I Love You! by Dri Cook (2)
"Di, I enjoy your work very much. I can sense that you put a great deal of emotion into your writing. " -- abbie angel.
"thank you, my dear. You're right. This is what writing represents to me: a great deal of emotion and honesty. " -- Dri.


Rock Me, Baby, Sing Me A Lullaby! by Dri Cook (6)
"a nice reckless and sexy fantasy filled with contradiction based on the selfish needs of one who wants lust and love (on the 1st person's conditions)...another rock back and forth, rythym piece..nice. " -- Brian O Neil.
"thanks, Brian. Glad you enjoyed it." -- Dri.
"Hey! i think i could turn this into a song. Nice to be called a lyrics." -- Akira.
"sounds good to me, Akira...then we could co-write, yes?" -- Dri.
"Oh that's definately a song! I can almost hear it, nice rhythm I like the way it flows. The lyrics are good too, I think we've all felt this way at some time and it comes across well here. Would love to hear it put to tune." -- Kavya.
"Well, maybe one day it will be turned into a song and the whole world will be singing it:-) Thank you all!" -- Dri.


River Life by Buxton (2)
"This puts me in mind of a James Taylor's song off the album copper line...when he sings about the war and the decorations of one's self is on the shelf... this is a good piece" -- e. rocco caldwell.
""our vacant eyes are laid bare..." Very nice. Then ending was well said. Great work." -- ryan severud.


Re-Telling Of Nature's Sad Death by Hayley Burdett (1)
"here rests the debate of human existence...I loved this!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Recipe Of Time by Brion' O Neil (1)
"I see what you mean by "great minds think a like"... brilliant work Brian... Wow... The message here is overwhelming. Great work." -- ryan severud.


Reaching For The Lover's Moon by Elizabeth Burnett (2)
"it's beautiful........." -- Dri.
" very heart felt and wonderfully written, i really like it alot!" -- tony, rocky, alta, canada.


Raspberry Fields by Buxton (3)
"Raspberry Fields?...where is the connection with the work?" -- Brian O Neil.
"Why does there need to be connection, so it can make you happy?? I write how I like, and name it what I want. Crystal?" -- Buxton.
"OK, OK, don't get touchy...I was expecting to wade through many brambles to gorge myself with that delectable fruit... " -- Brian O Neil.


Poochie by Randy Johnson (1)
"I'm sorry to hear he passed away. I too have a poem about my cute little poodle published here if you ever wanna read it. Dogs are wonderful animals and indeed - our best friends...." -- Dri.


Poem To Joanie by Brotherman (1)
"I can tell you loved her......or still love......right? Nice poem. Thanx for your review on my "Shadowy Depths..." poem. I just left you a reply." -- Dri.


Personification Of Winter by Hayley Burdett (2)
"I will show my ignorance by admitting that I know little of the technicalities of poetry writing. The only way I am able to judge it is by whether it conjures up images for me that are interesting - or not. This is one of those pieces! Very well done." -- Erasmus Flynt.
"I am speechless...you are one of the finest poets on this site!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Part Two In The New York, New York Poetry Series. by Hayley Burdett (1)
"gritted...I like this" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Our Love Goes Beyond by Katrina Browne (1)
"Love is beautiful thing, and its nice to see someone that has what everyone is looking for. Great poem by the way, I enjoyed it and could feel the love." -- Moses M. Constable.


Open To You by Buxton (1)
"interesting.....not bad at all. But I would change the lay out a little bit. Hmmmm....or perhaps it's part of it, to indicate some confusing feelings?? Tell me? Thanks for your reviews on my poems, Buxton." -- Dri.


Night Zombies by Abbie Angel (1)
"I pray that god will pull you from the fefuse and set you on his solid rock to leave it all behind." -- Brian O Neil.


New York, New York (Part One) by Hayley Burdett (1)
"nice...it sort of misses the visuals of your other poems but nice nevertheless" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Musician by Hayley Burdett (1)
"this is a difficult poem to write but you have handled it well." -- e. rocco caldwell.


Lunch by Sunny (3)
"that was cool, probably a typical lunchtime for many." -- just a guy.
"I like it too, don't know why, but I really do! Maybe because it's simple and written in a way that is very clear to get at the first glance. Keep up the good work." -- Dri.
"Dont know where you were going with this but most poetry can be found that way. You read much bukowski? your form of poetry is very similar, simplistic yet fun to read. I wasn't too fond of the review you wrote for my short. I dont care that you didnt enjoy it, would have been nice if you used constructive criticism. Any who, keep writing." -- ryan severud.


Lead In Walls by E Rocco Caldwell (4)
"Yes!!! Self destruction!! My amazement increases as I read all your new submission. " -- ryan seveurd.
"one of my favorites...I used to live in Newark....whatelse can I say!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"interesting...the least I can tell!" -- Dri.
"You're gettin' real...eh, Rocco? Nice work. I like this new "real" you." -- km.


Lady America by E Rocco Caldwell (2)
"What a stark paralell of thought and dedication.A brilliant composition. A living discriptive moment of history too. Bravo!" -- Brian O Neil.
"Very nice poem! " -- Hayley Burdett.


Just A Little Dream by Just A Guy (1)
"Wonderful imagery." -- Avis.


Just A Kiss by Skyler Drevan (1)
"it sounds more like a complain...if this was your goal, you went straight to the target. Well done." -- Dri.


Isn't There A Better Way by Just A Guy (3)
"Welcome back! Missed you here, JAG...where have you been? And HOW have you been?" -- Dri.
"been doing just fine thanks - hope you're doing well too." -- just a guy.
"Couldn't decide which one I liked best - this is fantastic!!! xx" -- Briony.


Insane Love by Dri Cook (7)
"It is rather "tennis match", but not insane. I found my body jerking from side to side as I read it. I suppose if someone was watching me they would think I was insane.This was an excellent work to get reactions on.It was different enough to be esthetically interesting, artistically speaking...BRAVO. GOOD JOB." -- Brian O Neil.
"another interesting analogy..you presented it like a couple arguing back and forth and like most man- woman relationships, when the biological differences don't blend and compromise...you get a no win tennis match.Did you intend for this to be that good?" -- Brian O Neil.
"Wow! I am flattered, Brian. I think "tennis-match" does fit this piece, wonderful anology. I named it "Insane" because that's the way love is when it's only one way road. Should always be a two way, instead. Thank you, my dear. " -- Dri.
"you know, most of my pieces talk about real life. This one did happen to me. Our relationship was like a tennis-match indeed. And I was just playing with words here, not planning anything but to express emotions and feelings in a very powerful way." -- Dri.
"and no...this is not a man and a woman arguing...this is a monologue instead, this is the way I saw our relationship...a depiction of it. There is another one that's called MY SWEET. They are, somehow, related." -- Dri.
"well, it could be an argument or turn in to one (it often does in a parallel relationship).You really hit on something here "Kinetic poetry"...this was a gift from God." -- Brian O Neil.
"you are right. It could also be. Thank you, my dear, and I am thankful to the Lord for such a gift!" -- Dri.


In Praise by Dri Cook (3)
"Very enlightening Dri. Excellent work!" -- ryan severud.
"thank you, my dear." -- Dri.
"Nice work. :)" -- buxton.


I'm Sorry by Brodie Hughes (1)
"Very well done on this one also. Regards," -- Erasmus Flynt, UK.


I Love... by Lucy Midnight (2)
"that's cute......I love it!!:-) So true, isn't it?" -- Dri.
"It's only a lure...she is a "black widow spider." -- Harry.


Hunger Moon by Abbie Angel (2)
"how touching... thanks for your review on my SAY "I LOVE YOU!"" -- Dri.
"Dear Abbie: Get out of the streets if you want to see the Light. Survival is your's for the taking; happiness you will have to find. Use your strength and survival skills to find a better place. In reply to your poems: For hunger there's also nourishment; for every addict, choice for recovery; for all Darkness, there's Light. If you continue to stay where you are, then you stop being a victim and become a contributor. From your portrayal of the streets, I see an infinite number of options that you'd be better off at. Shelter, church, anywhere. Don't glorify life on the streets, sweetie. Don't let that be your light. Get off the drugs and channel your creativity into writing stories. You'd do really good at like a fantasy/mystical book. Good luck." -- Cindy.


Hell by E Rocco Caldwell (5)
"sent chills up and down my spine, boy, i hope God has a short memory or i'm in big trouble." -- just a guy.
"Maybe a mental scare does just as much harm as a physical scare... excellent work! Very dark and creepy. Just how I like it." -- ryan severud.
"Excellent! I really enjoyed this one - the last line certainly does it for me!!! " -- Erasmus Flynt, UK.
"i liked the originality of the poem. the atmosphere and some of the images it constructs are convincing and appropriate to the theme. however, it lacks the subtle smooth polish, that only a poem of extraordinary focus can have." -- sunny, DC, usa.
"wonderfully written..." -- km.


He And You by Abbie Angel (1)
"sad tale beautifully told. i always hate hearing these stories of abuse but understand it helps to write it out. keep the faith." -- just a guy.


Hands In Glove by Dri Cook (1)
"A wonderful depiction of hope and empathy." -- Brian o Neil.


Good Morning by Hayley Burdett (1)
"you've been to my house, haven't you?" -- Brian O Neil.


Ghost Ships Of Long Ago by Aaron A Abab (1)
"THis is FABULOUS! I felt like I was right along the ships! Try not to deviate from your pattern though, it took away from the poem just try combining lines 11 and 12 I think it would sound better, otherwise great job! keep writing!" -- Halle, OR.


Fragance Of Heaven by Dri Cook (1)
"AMEN ! A CREATIVE WAY TO DESCRIBE OUR MOST HOLY AND MOST BLESSED OF EVENTS. " -- Brian O Neil.


Forever Lost by Abbie Angel (1)
"your work is so sad, but you do an excellent job of portraying your feelings. hope it helps." -- just a guy.


Fear In The Darkness by Rhiannon Price (2)
"The first line might read alittle better as "Darkness is a dim curtian of sparkling stars" The next line is sort of contradictory...the silence of night, every sound sinister! You said the was was silence....there aren't any sounds! Maybe "The sinister silence of the night" might work better. The next stanzas are nice....it a good poem of fear ." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Personally, I like the first line as it is - I find it conjures up interesting images. The second line may appear contradictory, but I have taken it as the night itself is silent, and that any other sound, real or imaginary is sinister. Maybe it's what the individual reads into it and I agree with Rocco that it is a good poem of fear. Well done." -- Erasmus Flynt.


Falling Tears by Dri Cook (2)
"An excellent account of being human and a wonderful depiction of a cleansing emotion of relief. Well done!" -- Brian O Neil.
"I agree with Brian. Great work Dri. The ending really put it all together. Very nice. " -- ryan severud.


End Of A Long Day by Just A Guy (4)
"a good piece on anticipation done right" -- Brian O Neil.
"glad you liked it, thanks for the review" -- just a guy.
"what can I say...Loved it! :)" -- mattie.
"I really like this poem...it's so real i could have been her." -- mia angello, WI.


Droit Du Seigneur by E Rocco Caldwell (2)
"Wow very dark and power hungry. *bows*" -- ryan severud.
"This was a contest poem...it did okay but it didn't win." -- e. rocco caldwell.


Cycle Of Street Life by Abbie Angel (4)
"a run aways story is never attractive and people always have stereotyped images of distortion. You are either very tragic, or putting us on. In any case, leave the misery behind you, this type of content is not usually a desirable read and most people can not relate or understand. It is my opinion that your writing would be better suited either in another form of fiction or in another parts of this vast world of ours.Let your imagination take you to places that will interest and excite your readers. I was a member of a homeless shelter for over a year, but my writing is a wide spectrum of life and love experiences as a celebration of my liberation...be liberated." -- Brian O Neil.
"Thank you, Brian. You are right--there is nothing good at all in being a runaway but if you really were in a homeless shelter then you know what drives someone to run away. I write because it is all I have left now." -- Abbie Angel.
"I urge you to leave the refse behind you and celebrate life by starting a new one. Yes, I know what rejection is and I know that you must pick yourself up and be greatful for being free..."let go and let God." -- Brian O Neil.
"I agree with the comment about your writing. I think you should either keep a journal or spend your time looking for a way out. Right now, you are living in Hell-you're the only one who's going to get you out with God's guidance. Find the strength from someone if you can't find it in God. Yourself, maybe? Don't perpetuate this dark, tragic life you're living. You've been hurt in the past, scarred but it's time to come to grips with it and change your life. By not doing something to save yourself you are just as bad as Steve." -- Cindy, san fernando, ca.


Cool Moonlight Outside My Hospital Door by E Rocco Caldwell (3)
"Fascinating! You have captured so much with so few words. " -- Mungo Faust.
"BRILLIANT !" -- Brian O Neil.
"very, very nice. A great job." -- Moses M. Constable.


Cloud Watching From A Romantic's Point Of View by Hayley Burdett (2)
" [Write poetry in the wind, mixing up our verses, seeing if they would come back to us.] <-- I really like that. Great imagery. Excellent piece of sorrow. " -- ryan severud.
"I'm in love with your style...this is a wonderful poem!" -- e. rocco caldwell.


Can't Find The Way by Just A Guy (1)
"I really like the rhythm of this poem. It's definitely that feeling love gives you when you're overwhelmed in a good way--like spinning around in circles with your eyes closed..." -- mia angello.


Beach's Memories by Hayley Burdett (1)
"loved this very much....try "trail of wind blowing all the way to Garfield street"" -- e. rocco caldwell.


A Passing Moment by Just A Guy (5)
"It kind of made me giggle because it's sort of like daydreaming in class until the teacher notices and brings you back to reality by slamming a book down on your desk. I wrote a new poem also...interested in your opinion." -- mia angello, WI.
"Loved the repeat thing, made me shiver," -- Steffe.
"Totally agree with mia ang. The sudden transition from dream to reality is fab." -- Avis.
"well, well, well, haven't heard from you in a long, long time. so long that i changed my name to 'curious'. thanks for the kind comment and nice to see you again." -- just a guy.
"just a test" -- ME.


A Fair Brown Maiden by E Rocco Caldwell (6)
"very moving erc, sad how the world works." -- just a guy.
"thank the Good Lord changes have changed!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"nice work rocco, always a joy to read your work.." -- buxton.
"A well told story. "very touching" - agreed. I'm always impressed by your work Rocco. Pleasure reading it. Hopefully I'll whip some work up myself tonight." -- ryan severud.
"A bit of history that a lot of people would like to forget. (Thomas Jefferson). You need to make more time to write Poetry away from your novels...it should refresh you, and we get to enjoy it." -- Brian O Neil.
"This is a very touching peice, this is the first peic ei've read of yours, and im very impressed..." -- Chloe.


A City Pineapple by E Rocco Caldwell (5)
"Very interesting... Unique veiws and once again very dark. I really like it." -- ryan severud.
"another Newark poem....glad you were affected by it." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"hard for me to understand, not being an American, but I like the way it flows, though." -- Dri.
"I like it...very urban and real. Good job!" -- km.
"It's awful. It's plain to see that it's the work of an amateur." -- Sam Thomas, Newark, USA, NJ.


10 Wishes by Lucy Midnight (1)
"In I wish all teenaged girls would read this wonderful piece of prose! Well done with a great message." -- e. rocco caldwell.


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