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Withering Away by Katherine Smith (1) "Dust we are made from and dust we shall return.. Great poem.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA. Sometimes by Colin Baker (3) "I really enjoyed this" -- Pam, Fairfield, Maine, USA. "I concurr, it is certainly a very interestingly set out poem as well, keep up the great work. Peace." -- Hugh. "Hello to you both, that's Pam and Hugh.May I thank you both very much for your very kind remarks. I am so happy, thanks !" -- Colin Baker. An Apple A Day by Colin Baker (4) "nice to see a socialist with a sense of humor, clever." -- curious. "Hi there. Actually, I'm not a socialist. I am Welsh....lol" -- Colin Baker. "You need help, This is psycobable." -- T.K. Hunter, greenville , alabama, usa. "Thanks T.K." -- Colin Baker. The Girl In The Corner by Carla Thomson (3) "this one doesn't make that much sense to me.. unless you making the point of saying your regected and neglected by fellow students... but i have read the rest of your work and i feel that if you work hard then you will be able to put your dream into place. " -- CB. "the point of this poems is that I�m different than my fellow students and a lot of them don't know how to except me for who I am, or they see how I look and assume that I�m a certain way, but I�m not... "I�m the girl in the corner" because when I was in school I was alone I didn�t know anyone, and the people around me� I don�t know� no one gave me a chance because I was different and I let it show... so at school I would watch people from the corner... thank you CB for your review and your support of my dream� ;-)" -- carla. "Carla, I understand you feeling totally... I was always the outsider... Now that you're a little bit older, It's time for you to give everyone another chance. You have a great talent and I will support your dream as i believe you can give hope and guidance to other's who are or have been in your situation before. Good luck in your future endevours... remember if you believe you can... You can" -- CB. Wish To Be A Child by Carla Thomson (1) "Nice poem,(everyone in their minds will always remember their happy childhood days), and to mothers (who will always treat their children as children -even the children have grown up - they too will always see the child in them and in their granchildren too. Some man will not marry - for the fear of losing the freedom and your poem is true about the responbilites) Oh also when people grown very old - they also cling on to the childhood memories - which are the best- as in your poem states the movies etc... (memories are somesort of an escape of what freedom used to be- carefree.. loved your poem on this...." -- Amy, Hayes, UK. She Walked In Beauty by Randall Barfield (2) "I liked this... It was well written! Is it about some one in particular?" -- chloe. "Thanks for responding. Should we say it is about someone in particular? By that I mean does it really change or affect the little poem? I will say I have admired Taylor's beauty all my life if that will help any." -- Barfield. Why Am I Single? by Carla Thomson (2) "your peom was great and i totally understand were your coming from if that means anything " -- MSN. "True love will come at the right moment in time. "Rome was not built in a day, Romance will come your way"." -- Amy, Hayes, UK. Where My Heart Has Been by M Q Walters (13) " I like this. Nice wording except that I don't think wonton is the correct spelling of that word. But it flows really well." -- CW. "wonton would be fine in soup - ha! ok, don't get mad, just having a little fun - it's really nice to see the tone of this poem, nothing like a little romance to brighten the morning, daytime or night is there? loved the body but not the heart line and tingle's surely are nice. and boy, did i go on." -- curious. "Ha ha! Guess spell check isn't fool proof afterall. If you only knew how much I hate mispelled words too...arggggggggg!! So, fixin that! " -- mattie. "OMG!!! I feel like an idiot! Mattie, I didnt know that MQ Walters was you! And I've always been such a fan too. Wow! Now I have an all new even better outlook on your work! I love this piece...says a lot about some relationships, nicely done, girl!" -- km. "WOW! Thank you km...I'm probably one of your biggest fans too!" -- mattie. "BTW, CW do you post here as well? If so under what name so I may read your work as well. " -- mattie. "hey Mattie nice feeling to this from a guy's perspective this has a real trueness about it I've felt this from girls in the past where the non comital thing is really what they need .nice write very real " -- fh, canada. "mattie....i do post here under the name of caroline woodson" -- Carolyn. "Thanks fh...CW, I'll look at your posts, spent alot of time lately still trying to get my story where I want it, so I've not read alot lately. :)" -- mattie. "I really like this, I empathise with the woman in it, is she searching for the one? or is she just making do? :)" -- Tamsin, Reading. "Are we not all looking for the one...to bad I guess...so we make do." -- mattie. "Loved this and feel the emotions came straight from my experiences... fantastic!!" -- Briony Carvalho. "Thank you Briony...talk about experiences...whew!" -- mattie. Wee Thanks Giving 2005 by Randall Barfield (1) "Wow this was awesome. I wish I could read more like this type" -- Jeanette . Wake by OgorodovA (2) "this is good and i totally agree" -- Carla, Washington st., us. "oooh, i like this very much, it makes me think, and sounds so poetic, yet philisophical at the same time. very good" -- bridget l larreau. This Is What A Friend Is by Lady Sashi (1) "i like this, short and sweet, yet makes a good point" -- bridget l larreau. The Sweetest Love by Rachel Alden (2) "Very nice." -- CW. "Whoa...now, that is some sensual stuff. Haha. Nice, girl." -- Angel of Hope. The Dawn by Vankipuram Rajagopal Sridharan (1) "Nice poem can I use this in our Slate and Style newsletter fall 2017" -- Shelley, Burkburnett, tx, usa. The Cold by SAR (4) "Very good SAR :)" -- mattie. "it would be hard not to be nice, u write os well for one so young and capture haiku wonderfully well. u sure ur only 9???" -- curious. "Thank you Mattie and Curious. I love to write. My mommy is teaching me. " -- SAR. "I look forward to seeing more. Wonderful choice of words, even for the most seasoned poet..." -- Fire Keeper. Temporarily Misplaced by David Daniels (3) "Hello, I'm an old author of this site and you've reviewed some of my old stuff. I really enjoyed your feedback, and I'd like to get in contact with you. You can email me at [email protected]. Hope to hear from you soon." -- harry. "beautifully penned..it reflects some events in our lives when we feel miserably lost.." -- edna, cebu, philippines. "beautifully penned..it reflects some events in our lives when we feel miserably lost.." -- edna, cebu, Philippines. Suicide Retribution by Samara (3) "Hey Samara, I really liked this. It's very well written and the wording is great! I can relate to this peice very well... keep up the good work :)" -- Amy Anderson, Newcastle, Australia. "I really like this, it's dark and really well written (not that I am an expert. :)" -- Tamsin. "Samara, wow! This piece is well written and I can feel the emotion." -- Pam. Scarred To The Core by Connie Kay Hallstrand (1) " Very well written." -- CW. Razor by Rachel Alden (1) "I used to cut myself, but I've been sober for almost three months. I'll admit, unlike other fake emos, that I never did it because it felt good but because I wanted attention. I wanted people to notice my troubles, my worries, my pain." -- Angel of Hope. Only Curious by Carla Thomson (1) "Great job Carla and never give up on any dream! You are a talented writer! You will succeed and also become your reality! Matthew Mark@" -- Matthew Mark Gill, USA. My Window by Lotte Rennie (1) "Excellent" -- george robertson, aberdeen. My Love by Vankipuram Rajagopal Sridharan (1) "Amazing" -- Alvin. Life Repeats by Tamsin Butler (5) "Since you're describing how you felt, it cannot be rubbish. " -- Pam , Fairfield, Maine, USA. "I never really thought about it like that, there are ways of writing feelings that sound better than others though aren't there?" -- Tamsin. "I like this one - the boy's a poo-poo head though!" -- Your sister. "Thanks I really appreciate the encouragement. It was too obvious who it was about. " -- Tamsin. "Lovely words, know how it feels to love someone who only wants to be my friend. it sums up all that I felt also beautifully and is definately not rubish" -- Kate Kerrison. I Wish The Darkness Would Disappear by David Daniels (2) "Amazingly beautiful David!" -- Alvin, India. "Hello, I'm an old author of this site and you've reviewed some of my old stuff. I really enjoyed your feedback, and I'd like to get in contact with you. You can email me at [email protected]. Hope to hear from you soon." -- harry. Heart by Tamsin Butler (1) "Like the use of words and I guess we have all felt like this at some point in our lives" -- Kate, Bucks. Happy Songs by David Daniels (3) "David...a difficult subject to write about but you did a good job on this. " -- mattie. "Quite hard hitting" -- Alvin. "Hey this is another author on storymania whose work you have reviewed. I read the piece and I really liked it, but I wanted to say that the comments you made on my work were very helpful. I'd like to get in contact with you, if you would email me soon I'd really appreciate it. You can reach me at [email protected] (it's my old email address but you can leave me a note, and I'll get back to you with my current address). Thanks again, hope to hear from you soon." -- harry. Going To Pieces by Ian Cramer (1) "This is one of my favourites . well done brother " -- patrick cramer, RHUDDLAN, Denbighshire, uk. God's Hands by David Daniels (5) "I liked this alot David. Well written with a nice flow. But like I've said before...climb the ladder to highest rung...then climb higher! xoxo :)Mattie" -- mattie. "I agree with mattie, its a great poem mate, remember poetry is a form of release and therefore usually it is the darker side that is prevalent, it is no malfeasance, so please keep up the great writing, Peace." -- Hugh. "i liked that one alot.....but plz do something more uplifting like somthing about your kids...see ya" -- Ryan. "Hello, I'm an old author of this site and you've reviewed some of my old stuff. I really enjoyed your feedback, and I'd like to get in contact with you. You can email me at [email protected]. Hope to hear from you soon." -- Harry. "We all think that we live in a love and caring world. Even if you live with your own loved ones sometimes you will feel that even your own illness is a burden to them. And than it is only God to whom we can turn to. Death is a horrible subject to talk about and it is very difficult especially for old people who are left to die on their own. Good poem which l hope a lot of people would look around and stop to care a little for the elderly." -- linda, Halifax, Leeds. For An Addict by Elizabeth Flores (3) "nice tribute, hard to watch and feel helpless but sometimes that's all there is." -- curious. "I've been where you are and it's hell! Take care of yourself though, and it will get better." -- JM. "Written with raw emotion and grief. It was easy to feel your sadness." -- CW. Fireworks by Laurence L'abre (1) "Really! Its humourous! I'd like to read more works by you. Really, I love your works. You will write more don't you?" -- Cherie, Singapore. Even Though It Hurts Me So Much More... by Rachel Alden (2) "I thought this was well written and I'm big against forced rhyming and you seem to have a good grip on staying away from that. I wasn't thrilled with the last line though...maybe you can change it to something more powerful. Nicely done Rachel!" -- km. "That is EXACTLY what I'm going through right now...my ex treats my like crap sometimes, but he can be the sweetest person in the world. And we are done now, but I still can't seen to stop loving him. My memories of him are still so fresh in my minm and they're too beautiful to erase." -- Angel of Hope. Confused by Carla Thomson (2) "Confusion...I wish I could say that goes away as you season...it doesn't! We just get better at focusing on what is really important..maybe. " -- mattie. " i really liked it really explains a feeling like life. i'm becka segroves so read mine soon" -- becka. But One Thorn by M Q Walters (3) "nice mood peice Mattie I could really feel the depression in this. it didn't come across as angry I hope thats what you meant sometimes the poetry stuff can be hard to define,nice write" -- fh, canada. "pesky promises, so easy to make, so easy to break - another nice, sad one mattie. u really don't expect him to change do u?" -- me. "Thanks fh...am not bitter or depressed really...just still trying to figure it all out. And who are you "me"...and no, I know he will never change." -- mattie. Bad Answers by Rae (1) "I really like the idea behind this one, we trust science to get answers but as you say they don't always give the right answers, Love it!" -- Tamsin Butler. A French Fragrance In Indian Soil by Vankipuram Rajagopal Sridharan (2) "Hi Raja - Am from India too. This poetry was really good. Was just wondering if this is based on any true incident?" -- Alvin , India. "In a Nutshell Exemplary" -- D P SURESH, Chennai, Tamilnadu, India. 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