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Withwithout by Drevan (2) "hey, hey, hey.......welcome back.......I was looking for you in here but under another pen name. So glad you're back, my dear. Your friend," -- dri, sao paulo, sp, brazil. "Love this...short sweet and powerful!" -- b.g.ryan, Ireland. When You Fall by Gina M Therrien (1) "could have been exactly my words for someone i have loved." -- Snowflakesoft. Vixen Vice by Req (1) "Though I have no idea what this is about, some of the imagery was very good. I think it loses its flow here and there and some of the rhymes are forced. I think this poem has a lot of potential and would like to see more from you. :)" -- mattie. Victorian Life by Andrews (1) "Nice poem, victorian life must have been very hard." -- Amy, London, UK. Vengence Driven by M Q Walters (2) "nice write Mattie very well put together, have a great evening" -- fh, canada. "Thanks fh :)" -- mattie. They Passed Away by Cedric McClester (1) "Age old description of death..." -- mattie. The Lighthouse by Dri (2) "One must never give up :)" -- mattie. "Go towardsthe light, it will guide you safely." -- gmt4. The Envelope by Dri (2) "The tears flow so easily down my cheeks as I write this. Such an empty, almost cruel reminder. I am so sorry Dri. GINA" -- gmt4. "Hey Dri. nice, sad piece. it feels good to be back. " -- Jeff. Tenakahan by Chloe L Batey (2) "'Greeny pus' hey? Nice." -- Kathleen. "yeah... thanks" -- chloe. Super Shithouse by Kendall Wilt (7) "Awwww shithouse....ha ha your my favorite" -- kwilt. "You and your damn shithouse poetry. How does a shithouse have anything at all to do with being of any importance to the etremely intellectial poets of this high poets society. Your a loser "quilt", stop this torcher and get a damn job. You suck!" -- elephantnuts, ass, hole. "Is this an alter ego kendall (elephantnuts). Anyway,i like 3ply more." -- Hugh. "I dont think it matters what she writes about-its her own choice and theres no need to get all harsh and psyco over nothing." -- Aimee. "Thanks dudes" -- kwilt. "Ha ha ha ha ha ha! Absolutely love this! so funny!" -- Tamsin Butler. "shithouse will be a legendary source for all eternity. (CHANTING) shithouse! shithouse! shithouse!" -- chad naquin. Resonate!! Requiem, Resonate!! by Req (1) "I liked this...the imagery is excellent...nice write Req" -- Mattie. Placid Dreamer by Sasu (1) "Yeah huh huh.....placid dreamer....right. Those aren't any kind of dreams I'd want to have. Sorry about all the pain and agony you got" -- kwilt. No Whys by M Q Walters (5) "Awww what a sweet little love poem" -- kwilt. "very sweet indeed...i enjoyed it." -- km. "Thanks Kendall, and km...when are we gonna get to see something new from you?" -- mattie. "nice write Mattie ,you seem to be moving away from the dark side,a softer touch .have a great evening" -- fh, canada. "I am not always dark, fh...just seems that is when I am most motivated to write." -- mattie. No Tide by M Q Walters (5) "simply precious.....would work for many types of love" -- kwilt. "nice write Mattie ,you seem to be writing lighter more often these days ,have a great evening" -- fh, canada. "Thanks Kendall, there are many types of love indeed. And thanks fh, you always have kind words to say :)" -- mattie. "Jealous....that you wrote this poem and not me. Simply stunning! Loved it x" -- briony. "Ah...thanks Briony...no need to be jealous you write great stuff! :)" -- mattie. My Imagination by Chloe L Batey (3) "I love you Chloe Lea" -- Aunty Kate. "YAY!! lol " -- chloe. "I actually don't much like this one... what does everyone else think?" -- chloe. My Everything by Ibemeforever (1) "I love this poem, and have a question. Did you also write "The Lost" a 9/11 poem? I love that one too, and if you are the author, I have a proposal for you. Please email me." -- Don Goble, Saint Louis, MO, USA. Love!! Sickening Stuff!! by Chloe L Batey (4) "I love this one! I love the way it sounds just like the thought patterns of a jilted or unrequited lover! I hope the bruises are figuratively speaking though. KB" -- Kelly Batey, Sydney, NSW, Australia. "Yes they are! None of the poems I write are really about me... some are loosely based... like a fight with one of my friends could turn into a love poem... Thankyou Mum for reviewing!! " -- chloe. "You know Chloe this poem could be the single line'LOVE!! Its sickening stuff!!' That does it for me. It sums it up. Good stuff" -- Neil, UK. "Hey thanks Neil!! " -- Chloe. July In My Eye by Kendall Wilt (2) "I like it man. Sometimes the lack of words emphasises the point. And I felt that from this piece. Hope you had a good day. Reads as if you did." -- Tom Bomb. "Thanks for reading, this is just a jingle. The shithouse poems are the ones that are worth their words in gold" -- kwilt. Gift From God by Andrews (1) "beautiful, beautiful poem. Praise the Lord." -- amy, london, UK. Fall Apart by Ibemeforever (1) "A family that prays together.....stays together" -- Junior, Cardiff, Wales, Wales. Endless Love by Dri (1) "wow... that was beautiful... eternal love, i wish all of us could find that... and with the right person... i love reading your poetry; all of it's wonderfull!" -- Carla Thomson. Driming Of You by Dri (2) "Dri; God has his plans. I pray that your dreams come true. God will make certain that the best for you will always happen, we just need to look for the signs. Remember to look both ways before crossing the street, open mail cautiously, and thank Him for your everyday. You are blessed." -- gmt4. "The "God with his plans", and the "looking for signs" I have lost my certainty of...but I wish the best for you, if that counts :)" -- mattie. Doctors Feel Pain Too. by Buxton (1) "touching" -- kwilt. Dead Hurricane by Kendall Wilt (1) "well put together Kendal ,really enjoyed the read and your view on an uncontrollable event have a great day" -- fh, canada. Alook From His Eyes by David William Bielefeld (2) "I did the grammer wrong to send home my message on judgement. The origonal is on poetry.com." -- Author David William Bielefeld, Merrillville, IN, United States. "Misspelled original purposely." -- Author. Alien Within by Monica L Sprague (1) "very good poetry.straight to the point and comprehensively terse" -- yemi, lagos, Lagos, nigeria. A Lonely Park In The Fall by Sasha Taylor (1) "sad" -- mattie. A Letter To You by Carla Thomson (2) "Totally awesome girl keep up that fine writing! Such Talent.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA. "I know how you feel. I don't think you are chicken after reading that, wanting to appologise makes you strong in my opinion. :)" -- Tamsin Butler. 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