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Shine Your Light by Amarjit Bhambra (2)
"We will all be angels one day, if we go to Heaven that is. Nice poem! " -- Angel.
"Dear Angel, Yes i do agree, Even the sinners are forgiven if they ask for forgiveness. God Bless." -- Amy, london, UK.


The Rude And The Polite by Amarjit Bhambra (7)
"Forgive me for being rude, but I've noticed that you've posted over 30 recent poems and essays on this site. I suggest you concentrate on quality rather than quantity and try improving your understanding of English grammar, spelling, and puntuation, before you post more work. If you don't, You are going to drive away potential readers by this lack of writing skill. " -- Richard.
"This Poems says it all. Sorry not trying to be rude. My Spell check is not on the program l am using. - Lets face it I have read worse poems and essays than my own - we are all human. All the 30 peoms and essays were written and put on my disc and than they fly off here! Otherwise l am very very busy with my quality time. I look after 3 generations, a baby, teenagers and the Old. Thanks for your advice. " -- Amy, Hayes, UK.
"Maybe some one needs to be looking after you. You certainly don't take criticism very well. That is something very vital when you post your work here for others to read and comment on. And I'm sure whom ever it is you do look after, it is most definitely of your own choice, because I can't see someone of your ignorance and arrogance, being forced to do something she doesn't want to do. I liked some of your work, it's just a shame about your attitude towards other's comments." -- Truth.
"I truely love every ones comments on my work, I love this website and the criticism. Thank you for reading my work. PS I normally sent my work to be published in books and it is normally proread before publishing. Over the past say, 9 to 10 years, most of my work is accepted for publishing. (the only thing is - it is not critized by anyone for me to read) So you can undersand I do appreciated your comments. Sorry if you got me all wrong. (I did rush of all my work in one go) hoping for comments)>" -- Amy, Hayes, UK.
"Richard, thanks for your comment, Only time will tell iff readers are driven away. I am getting comments and feed back anyways- I have read much worse peices than my own - but l still enjoy reading themselve." -- Amy, London, UK.
"That is not the point if you've read worse or not, we are commenting on YOUR work. That is what this site is for. And you shouldn't boast about the comments and feed back you are getting because I have noticed you have recieved quite alot of negative feedback. Most of it is to do with your awful grammer. So stop comparing your work to others and concentrate on QUALITY not QUANTITY." -- ...K.
"K, These mistakes must have been in the 30 pieces - never mind - l'll try harder next time. cheers. " -- Amy, London , UK.


Honour by Green Emerald (5)
"I LOVE THIS POEM. I myself am not much of a poet but i have read several poems and I must say this is one of the best!" -- Briana Willhoite, Rumford, maine, USA.
"Thank you so much for your lovley comment Briana, you've made my day, my week, my month and year! Keep reading. God Bless" -- Green Emerald, UK.
"You've nicely shown the two sides of honour that exist in our world and both conclusions "Honour shouldn't be what others expect" "Honour shouldn't be used as an excuse to kill" are so true that there is nothing more I can say except GREAT WORK. " -- Andrzej Podlewski, Katowice, �l�skie, Poland.
"Thank you so much for your kind comments!" -- Green Emerald.
"rhmxkue rmygjav wqcin xupiehsd kmicp rnbj uqtgwcn" -- ejgkbfv juyelmpsb, ifolv, CA, USA.


You Love Her by Carla Thomson (1)
"Carla, He wont be with her when he is old and grey. Once again personal spillage of emotion that is quite simple but hits the spot. Amazing that some writers have to make this stuff up!!" -- Neil, Uk.


Wrings Of Change by April M Hansen (2)
"This is my light when things are dark! Great! Check out Roller Coaster.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"Firstly on the editorial side this poem might be better read in lower case. Are you aware of the message sent to the reader when it is in Upper case? It is not normally done. Next the content is interesting except I came across a clash of who the narrator might be. A he or a she or evn an I. Over use of the word has and very close to each other. But all this can be sorted out very easily. Best wishes" -- Cleveland W. Gibson, UK.


Where Is It? by Carla Thomson (3)
"Totally cool love it!" -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"Awww sweet poem" -- kwilt.
"That was really good..." -- Jordan.


U Blew It by Jay Little (1)
"I'm have litl dog & cat! I want to share with you were you'll be find this for your pets: collar nice buy cat buy nice cat collar collar buy cat nice nice collar buy cat nice collar cat buy nice cat collar buy buy quality cat collar nice buy cat collar nice buy collar cat dog collar " -- Fill, Kiev, Kiev, USA.


Time Goes By by Kate Kerrison (3)
"I agree, we do forget that time is fleeting and we should cherish all the time that we have with the people we care about, Lovely piece!" -- Tamsin Butler.
"I'm have litl dog & cat! I want to share with you were you'll be find this for your pets: collar nice buy cat buy nice cat collar collar buy cat nice nice collar buy cat nice collar cat buy nice cat collar buy buy quality cat collar nice buy cat collar nice buy collar cat dog collar " -- Fill, Moscow, Moscow, France.
"Beautiful poem. So much meaning. So much truth." -- Green Emerald.


Thinking Of My Past by Carla Thomson (1)
"wow punky good job! your just writing your heart out.. ha" -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


These Tears Of Blood by Chloe L Batey (2)
"This is good I think. My honest reaction is it needed to be longer. I'm left wondering what happened. What they say about art is that it could mean something different as you revisit it, and time passes. I could read the same book five years later, and take away something entirely different from when I read it the first time. Even a painting could do that. On another level on the length...it could be exactly as it's supposed to be. " -- Howard.
"Hello Howard, it's meant to be something someone can read and say, I know how that feels, no particular meaning behind it, again an old one. Thanks for the review. " -- Chloe .


The Yun And The Yin by Amarjit Bhambra (2)
"For someone who doesn't know what Yin and Yun are this poem is a good place to start, for balance is the only state in which we can be truly happy. " -- Andrzej Podlewski, Katowice, Poland.
"Hi, Andrzej, thank for making readers understand a bit on this one. Much appreciated. " -- Amy, London, UK.


The Impact Of Her by Jay Little (1)
"I really liked it. " -- CrystalRae, cedarville, OH.


The First Shower Of The Year by Snowflakesoft (1)
"Your imagery is great. Like your personification of concepts. Keep up the good work." -- Avis.


The Drums Of Jericho by Sasu (1)
"Sasu, you are really refining your skills, your last few poems have been amazing...like great ballads" -- kwilt.


The Age Of The Less Forgotten by Carla Thomson (3)
"Very good very different and unique.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"Nice flow and expressive. I think this poem means what it meant for you when you wrote it, then it means to all who read it something as individual as we all are...if that made sense :) " -- mattie.
"yes... i think i know what you mean... thanks" -- Carla Thomson.


Thank You God... by Bhambra (6)
"Sounds like your mother suffered alot. You should be happy she is in a much peaceful place. I think the people who don't suffer at all and peacefully die in their sleep are the lucky ones. Even though your mother might not have been so lucky on earth, she certainly is happy in heaven." -- angel.
"I know that my mother is in Heaven. I am just very very thankful to God, for such a lovely Mother - she was the next best thing to God. She was my gurdian Angel and l now that she she still my Angel. We shared so much happy moments together - I thank God a Millions Folds for a Mother like mine. Her heart was pure as gold." -- Amy, London, England.
"Such a sad loss when you loose the one who put you on this earth. Stay Strong. We all have to go one day." -- Bex.
"Thanks for your thoughts Bex, Even though our Mothers are the ones that put us on this Earth, We must never forget the love and respect they had for us. That is how true mothers bring their children up, with All the Love and All the Respect that they can give." -- Amy, London, UK.
"But when some mothers grow old and start going through a mid life crisis, like if they get their son's or daughter's married, they start to forget being happy for their children but instead they feel left out. Jealousy can make them loose all their respect. I have experienced this myself." -- Shelly.
"So, I was personally very very grateful to God to have a Mother like mine. We try to copy our own Mothers, but we can never replace them with anyone elses or ever be like them. I was very very fortunate, I am proud to let the World now that she was the only sister, A great mother and a lovely granmother to my children - I couldn't thank God enough." -- Amy, London, UK.


Some Things I Thought You Should Know. by Rochelle Lynn Schriner-Stowell (2)
"What an awesome poem , almost made me cry. Two thumbs up!!!! AAA+, 10, what else can I say to let you know it was GREATTTTTTTT." -- Robert Frazier.
"Oh my gosh that is soooo sweet!" -- Jordan, Little Rock, Arkansas.


Raven by Rae (2)
"Great poem, check out Tickets for the show." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"I really liked this Rae...and it's good to see some new stuff from you :)" -- mattie.


One Man by Matthew Mark Gill With God All Things Are Possiable (1)
"Wow Bro!!! Whoa man, I really don't know what to say....I'm completely amiss with my words. I mean, I can only say thanks dude, what an honor" -- kwilt.


Nothing More From You by Noel States (1)
"Excellent! You've told my story!" -- Brooke.


Mysterious Comfort by April M Hansen (1)
"Awesome, totally awesome.. Loved it.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


Miracles Do Happen by Kate Kerrison (2)
"Like the sentiment of the piece, very well written" -- anon.
"Right you are, Life if full of Mircles." -- Amy, Hayes, UK.


Little Words by Tamsin Butler (4)
"Great job! really really liked this one! Really." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"wow... yea i can relate to this one.. and i really liked it too... the way you wrote it, and the way it reminds me of my past... really liked it..." -- Carla Thomson.
"GOOD JOB I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. THANKS." -- APRIL.
"Hey - liked this but could so with some tweaks like is she A lesbian and a coupla forced rhymes later. Needs a bit of tightening up then it could be a fantastic poem Gil :)" -- Gilbert.


Life Wasted Sitting by Carla Thomson (1)
"Hey princess great poem.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


Jam Sandwiches by Kate Kerrison (1)
"very silly indeed but it made me smile " -- anon.


Irreality Showing by Kendall Wilt (2)
"nice reflection of society ,seems like we all have our priority a bit mixed up .it's like we all lack motivation and were just waiting to be entertained nice write have a great evening" -- fh, canada.
"I was hoping that only fifty percent of people out there were like that. I know that the people who taught me to view the world as it is are still around. I hope that this vision does not die out with that generation." -- kwilt.


In The Shadows by Cc (3)
"liked this poem. thought it was well put together ,I'm no kind of poet so I'm really just seeing this as a casual observer but what if you changed the last line in each verse to "in the wind in the wind they'll blow" and you would have to change the line "changing colours ,changing moods"and maybe add changing with the flow .anyhow just thought I'd run it by you again I'm not much of poet and most poetry is way over my head .have a great evening ." -- fh, canada .
"i really liked this one... i liked it just how it is... it's perfect... well atleast i thought so... it was one of those poems were you can read it and say... wow... that was good... i totally get the meaning... and the visual aspect of it as well... well keep up the good work... i think you might enjoy reading one of my newer poems..."Midnight Rain"... *smiles*... well have a good night... " -- Carla Thomson.
"I'm have litl dog & cat! I want to share with you were you'll be find this for your pets: collar nice buy cat buy nice cat collar collar buy cat nice nice collar buy cat nice collar cat buy nice cat collar buy buy quality cat collar nice buy cat collar nice buy collar cat dog collar " -- Mark, Moscow, Moscow, Iran.


In Out by Amarjit Bhambra (2)
"I'm not trying to be a smart ass but it's actually spelled haiku and it means a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons or it could be any poem written in this form. I'm very fond of haiku's, yours delt with the great subject-o-life which anyone alive can relate to.....Good stuff, keep up with the writing! " -- kwilt.
"dear Kwilt, Yes it is spelled Haiku. I wrote my first Haiku in School and won a competition writting it than. After 15 years later, I entered the same poem for competition and came Semi-finalist in a Poetry competition. I am glad you like this one - I love to try to keep writing Haiku - The joy of writing Haiku is that is had to make sense in just a few lines. Thanks for reading. " -- Amy, Hayes, UK.


I'm Not Gonna Be Beat by Alia Harold (1)
"I'm have litl dog & cat! I want to share with you were you'll be find this for your pets: collar nice buy cat buy nice cat collar collar buy cat nice nice collar buy cat nice collar cat buy nice cat collar buy buy quality cat collar nice buy cat collar nice buy collar cat dog collar " -- newboy, Moscow, Moscow, Iran.


Horror Haiku by Kendall Wilt (4)
"HaHaHaHa dude, I laughed my ass off.. I dunno why really, this kinda sucked. Dead frogs an all I guess!" -- sasu.
"I was laughing too when I wrote it. I mean yeah, poor frog but it was well worth the dark humor" -- kendall.
"and how did the frog die? shouldn't they be able to survive in water? they are amphibious. dumb frog should not have fallen off of the log." -- intoxicated mind.
"And that my friend, is where the horror comes in" -- kendall.


Granite Miles by Buxton (4)
"liked this ,made mewish I could go there right now .and see this historic city .nice write" -- fh, canada.
"Thanks. I hope you do get to see our wonderfull city. It's nothing amazing, but it's ok." -- Buxton.
"Very cool.....great roots" -- kwilt.
"loved your poem, i have been to various places in England and love the history behind each city. One day l would love to visit Aberdeen too..and Edinburgh Castle and the bagpipes...it is a completely different taste to London.." -- Amy, Hayes, UK.


Gone Forever by Nikky Epperly (1)
"Great poem liked it.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


Get Out Of My Head by Carla Thomson (1)
"wow I'm mind boggled that was greeeeeeeat!" -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


From Womb To Tomb by Snowflakesoft (1)
"Deep" -- Avis.


Fly Like A Sparrow by Carla Thomson (1)
"Like Nelly Furtado fly like a bird! as this poem is everyone's sky! great freaking job.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


Don't Look At Me by M Q Walters (6)
"Though very heartbreaking, this is full of emotion and very well written. " -- rae.
"hey Mattie nice to see you post something again your writing is always so well delivered .this is definitely back in your depression themes ." -- fh, canada.
"deeply moving and so evocative - a fantastic piece" -- me.
"Thank you Rae...it is nice to hear from you. And as always fh, your reviews are kind. Thank you, me, wonder if you have another name, it is difficult to address another as "me". " -- mattie.
"I'm sorry mat" -- mandi.
"I have many names Mattie but in this place you tend to get personal comments back on your work if you review unfavourably so I remain anonymous to be what this site was designed for; impartial and constructive comments(generally although there is one glaring exception to that)" -- me.


Does Anybody Need A Pray, Let Me Pray For You... by Bhambra (2)
"And I suppose you think you have the Spiritual Gift? Thats very good to know." -- Angel.
"If you believe in God you have to be truthful, I have asked God for lots and lots of things, and he is the only one to answer to my prayer. These come with life experiences - You believe in them when they actually happen and it can only happen throught mediating and communication with God and if you fully trust God. The truth is God can proform the Mircles - I believe in Mircles - these are the wonderful works of God. - If l keep these to myself l would be selfish. " -- Amy, UK, London.


Do Yea Remember Those Eyebrows Gil? by Amarjit Bhambra (1)
"Dear Bex, thanks for reading, One l done in a short story form and his one in poetry. Some people like reading poems and others story. You got through to reading both. Thanks for reading either form." -- Amy, London, UK.


Congratulations by Carla Thomson (1)
"congratulations and hope ya shine bright." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.


Boys Vs Girls! by Green Emerald (3)
"A womanizing friend of mine was once asked if he thought women were really equal to men. He replied, "If you have to sit down to piss, it's likely you don't have a brain in your head."" -- Richard.
"I think Richard should apologize. Some of us have brains." -- Red Ruby.
"The joke was stupid it actually made me laugh! Thank you for taking the time out to read my short poem. I'm not even sure what sort of message I was trying to give across. In God's eyes we are all equal. But 1 thing I do know is women have it much harder!" -- Green Emerald.


Boing! by Kate Kerrison (3)
"I like this one - made me giggle and made me remember what it was like before they learn to fart in front of you and lie around doing nothing!" -- Briony Carvalho.
"Hey cool....So that's what you ladies like eh" -- kwilt.
"I must compliment Briony for a really funny review. It was better than the poem. I'm sure a lot of women share your sentiments. " -- Richard.


Blue Thorns by April M Hansen (1)
"This is a powerful poem that opens a lot. I really like the way you didn't hold back on what you needed to say. I don't see this is as a poem, but more of an angry vent at your Mother. I know I dont have the right to say anything: but if you said these words to the person they are aimed at, I'm sure you will find closure on the subjects you pose. I sincerely liked this, it said a lot of things. Maybe wanna ease up on the caps however. Thanks for sharing this with us, I hope it works out for you." -- Buxton.


As She Waits by Aa Farfaglia (2)
"^_^ I like it! ^_^" -- Ryuichi Minamino.
"I'm have litl dog & cat! I want to share with you were you'll be find this for your pets: collar nice buy cat buy nice cat collar collar buy cat nice nice collar buy cat nice collar cat buy nice cat collar buy buy quality cat collar nice buy cat collar nice buy collar cat dog collar " -- Cowboy, New York, New York, USA.


Apple by Sasu (2)
"Cool poem! I like the ending." -- reQ.
"wphoskq pbfji vcsbhfq bnpmfeozw orjcbl wsbkptaon wxugmr" -- qnbx rjvxbgds, nizfl, CA, USA.


Alarm Clock by Carla Thomson (1)
"I can really relate to this, except I have a digital clock; its a bit different because I like to see the numbers to know how long I have before I have to get up, so I don't like turning it some psychological thing. Nice write. " -- Dave Sutton.


A Missing Part by Curious (1)
"Hi - thank you for trying to tell me anout the HUGE amount of spoof reviews I received - I have deleted them! Thank you for reading my work and can I say that I have been following your work for a while and am a great fan" -- me.


A Fleck Of Sand by Carla Thomson (2)
"Totally awesome! great job and loved this one.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
"Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. I love you, sweetie." -- Desi.


A Card For My Love by Carla Thomson (1)
"That was just clever. I loved it!!!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA.


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