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Contradictory Deliverance by Colin Baker (2) "i had to read this over a few times... i like it...i cant really explain why i do... the tittle stuck me as intersting so i had to see.. im glad i did. it feels like theres something behind the words... its confusing... but somehow clear... sorry... im probably confusing you... i just kind of bable when i think sometimes. oops. yeh, ill try keep it simpler. Basicly, its cool. good work. when i have time ill read mroe of your stuff.." -- Jessi. "Jessi, thank you...." -- Colin Baker. You Can't Save Me by M Q Walters (3) "Yea! Let death save us all! Really great poem. love it!" -- Nikki Zuraidah. "I do not view death as my savior..." -- mattie. "Hi Mattie, send me a message sometime blindthesystem@gmail" -- kwilt. Yearning by Andrews (2) "Interesting. The push and pull of emotions. To say alot in a few words is the essence of creative writing. Thanks for sharing...........peace!" -- Richard Evans. "hey i like ur content but i dint like the way you set it out - still deep very nice :D xx" -- charley troy, uk. My First And My Last True Love... (My Feelings Over The Death Of My Bf) by Nikki Zuraidah (1) "UR POEM iiS AWSOME ii ENJOyED READiiNq EVERY LAST WORD FROM iiT" -- JACQUELINE RIVERO, MIAMI, FLORIDA. Mists Of Autumn by Chris Grant (1) "It's really good, however I thought it would be about all the great things in Autumn so I don't really get the rest" -- Brittney Maree. How Lucky Am I? by T Demarest (1) "It is really great and conjures up such pretty pictures in my head...it makes people realise how lucky we are to live " -- Brittney Maree. Cute Little Kids by Carla Thomson (1) "Beautiful and poignant. Thanks for sharing............peace!" -- Richard Evans. Vexatious by Tara Bridget Moore (2) "This poem provides a sensuous evocation of female passion. The verses are lyrical and well sculpted, offering an alluring but ultimately artistic rendition of love and attraction. The rhyme scheme adds to the lyric flavour of the poem overall, and leaves the reader with a sense of romantic grandeur. " -- Derek Richer. "Derek, thank-you for your very thoughtful review, it is appreciated." -- Tara. The Heart Of The Aussie Digger by Chris E Ivins (1) "I think this is a wonderful poem that captures the essence of the attributes of a true hero, and could apply to those returning back from battle from any country. This poem brings back vivid images of those who served as I watched on the side lines on Anzac Day. Well done. " -- Tara. I'll Try For You by Carla Thomson (2) "Very impressed great job! :)" -- Matthew Mark@, USA. "...aah the end of a love affair. Fertile ground for us wordsmiths. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.............peace! " -- Richard Evans. Diet Of Worms by French (1) "Say what?" -- Cedric McClester, New York, NY, United States. A Moment To Remember by Sierra M L Short (1) "hey i think your poems content was really nice and the words you used were beautiful but i think you should pace it better by balancing out the sylables so that the match on each line because at the minute it doesnt quite go. but it is very beautiful well done! xxxx" -- charley, alnwick, northumberland, uk. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 |
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