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Again And Again by Stuart Eric Longridge (2)
"Nice progression of thought, very loving and dedicated piece. You show your tender side." -- Brian O Neil.
"8/14/04 Hey man, where did you go and what ya doin'?" -- Brian O Neil.


Our Holographic Farm by Stuart Eric Longridge (1)
"figures...a new ager...rampager" -- Brian O Neil.


Hologramic Farm by Stuart Eric Longridge (1)
"Dude, I liked this. I picked up on the beat let the words carry me. Great Job! I have to admit I don't get a lot of it but the flow was great." -- e. rocco caldwell.


A Foreign War by Eric Richards (1)
"*****Awesome, I like it." -- d donely.


By My Soul by Eric Richards (2)
"I have enjoyed what I have read so far from you...you do have talent I think...but beneath the 2nd Chorus 4th line did you mean unaware?" -- mattie.
"I sure did mean unaware. Thanks for the review. :-)" -- Eric Richards, Gainesville, Fl.


Seventeen by Eric Richards (1)
"*****I like it" -- d donely.


My Lamb by Rae (7)
"Whoa! That was WICKED!!!!!!!!" -- Michelle.
"been a wicked kind of day. glad it came out accordingly :D" -- Rae.
"*****This was awesome, reminds me of how I write sometimes. It started out kind of innocent like, and ended ...well, more evil.." -- d donely.
"this really grabbed me - loved the transition from love to hate." -- Just A Guy.
"Whoah! I like! I could almost hear an evil laughter in the end... "Heh, heh, heh..."" -- Tessa.
"oh my freakin god... that was so awesome! it seriously took me on a journey... one minute i was in a whole innocent world, like youd picture a happy family at a park, and the next minute i was in hell... i like it!" -- lindsay, MO.
"hehe thanks everyone. glad you all like it" -- rae.


Afraid And Alone by Sara Roggy (1)
"You are very talented, Sara. Poetry is a wonderful outlet for your feelings. I have a twelve year old daughter, and I see many of the things she is going through in your works. Please keep writing! You have a gift!" -- Paula.


Destiny's Roulette by Cass (1)
"This is sweet Cass but you have tons of misspelled words. And when you say "at" you typed "as" both times. Edit, edit, edit! Overall, nice, sweet poem." -- Michelle.


- You Showed Me - by Karina Lizet Perez (3)
"Please Leave a Review I love to hear what people think of my lyrics even if they didnt like them! :) -thanks" -- Karina.
"HEY KARINA!! UR TEH EBST EVA!! ME AND U WILL DEFF MAKE IT TO TEH BIG LEAUGES!! HEHE YA!! GREAT SONG!! LOVE IT!! TOTALLY RESEMBLES HOW CHIKS ARE IN LOVE WITH DUDES! EHEH YA!" -- Kristen R!! ur pal!, Nipawin, Sask, Canada.
"you guys should live together." -- Harry.


Too Nice by Cass (3)
"*****This is good. I agree with it..guys are confusing.." -- d donely.
"I liked this. It is the same on both sides though. I know that guys think the same thing about girls. Sometimes it's tough to tell the difference between someone liking you as a friend and someone liking you more than that. It's hard to just "ask" because the fear of looking dumb, for lack of a better word. Plus, it can make things uncomfortable, possibly ruin the friendship. But you have to just "ask." Don't torture yourself. If this is a true story that is. Sounds like he might be talking about you though. When guy's say, "I have this friend...." They're usually talking about themselves. That's what I did." -- Flipanmc.
"Thanks guys...yap i know it also happens to both genders but normally guys are regarded as the more "fickled" party tho not neccessary..could say this is a true story, i really do not wish to ruin the relationship although would really wanna know his feelings for me." -- Cass.


One More Time by Sara Roggy (1)
"*****This poem really reminds me of what I'm going through right now. " -- d donely.


Hey Little Dreamer by Shelley J Alongi (1)
"Nice Hook Shelly!" -- Monte.


Bored Without You by Cass (3)
"I read through all your songs (making up the tunes) and i give all of them a 9 purely coz i dont belive in being perfect but i must say tears started falling for some reason - silly innit!?" -- emma trew.
"Thanks...nope i don't think is silly..cos it's my wish to write songs which could make everyone feel with it..." -- Cass.
"This song hit home with me - because I have a commuter marriage ,needless to say I feel like this alot!" -- christine.


Sad Day by Chauncey Brummell (1)
" This is good, although I wonder if the chorus should be a little longer? It has universal appeal. " -- christine.


Not Gonna Change by Sara Roggy (1)
"I like the attitude, hang in there. just a bit curious should it be think instead of thing or is that a generation gap?" -- Just A Guy.


I Cannot Believe by Karina Lizet Perez (3)
"Hey karina well i think this is a tight song,well i see it more like a poem cuz it is sorta like a poem right,but u know i like it alot cuz in some parts me acuerda de lo q hice,u know what i mean?(vacations) well i love how u sing and the songs u write. Specially this one right now.Thats what i think bout this song,poem. :) Much luv/ur friend" -- Ivette, San Ysidro, CA, united states.
"*****I liked this, it's good. I just wish I had the music to go with it...." -- d donely.
"yeah karina,dis a wicked tune, wicked lyrics, keep up da good work. wen u get large, u gatta sign my aoutograph. ya boy spida" -- sPiDa, freeport, grandbahama, bahamas.


A Mother's Lullaby by Shelley J Alongi (2)
"Absolutely beautiful piece Shelly! First stanza, second line, a typo "heart"! " -- Robert (Monte) Montesino.
"I thought this was very touching. Nice way to capture a Mother's Love for her children! Excellent!" -- Molly B.


Take Me Home by Rae (5)
"Rae, I like this a lot! But I think its supposed to "insane" not inane...lol. Nice lyrics!" -- Michelle.
"I too like this Rae, sad but tells a story nicely. inane or insane works just fine for me. musically i can't help a lick, damn tin ear." -- Just A Guy.
"thanks for the reviews :) actually, i did mean "inane," but thanks all the same! (hm, or would it sound better as "insane" instead?)" -- rae.
"I like this too! The first thing that came to mind when I read this was the movie "Girl Interrupted." " -- Molly B.
"Very nice flow and great lyrics. This is very impressive, :)" -- Dennis Kanan.


You've Lost by Karina Lizet Perez (2)
"Cool Site!" -- Araceli Cervantes, National City, CA, USA.
""This is a cool site!!!"" -- Bianca Estrada, National City, CA, USA.


Snowing In April by Pearl S (1)
"I liked your sad story Pearl, nicely done. Here's hoping the real spring will lift your spirits. need an s on a couple of your flowers." -- Just A Guy.


Those Words That Hurt The Most by Karina Lizet Perez (3)
"Hey, Its me Karina (the one who wrote this song) well personally i think this is my favorite song of them all...please everyone who comes to read my songs *leave a review* it makes me really happy to know that people actually like my lyrics, Thank You!" -- Karina.
"this is good, i think you're on the right track to stardom :)" -- rae.
"nice..nice.. a lot of emotion in it! :) keep up the good work." -- Hanan.


We Are Connected By A Net Of Faith by Pearl S (4)
"Beautiful and inspiring, Pearl!" -- Judith Goff.
"Hujk hak blak balk uuyy!" -- Saddam Hussein.
"Boo! Saddam Hussein sucks!" -- Carmen.
"lol...thanks judith and carmen. saddaam...we'll talk. " -- pearl.


'ms. America' by Pearl S (1)
"Ain't that the painful truth. You must have done pretty good on this, because I didn't check for mistakes after a couple lines. Good work." -- Sylvia.


The High Tides Of Hell by Stuart Eric Longridge (2)
"The title is what made me want to read this poem. This poem is sort of like John Edwards' Sinners in the hands of an angry God." -- Steven T.
"Well its actually a song, i hope you ment it was good or something.Thanks" -- S.E.L.


The Green Man by The Birdman (4)
"I dont know if this is poetry or rap,or are they the same thing,i dont know,but i like it ,its fun and honest,some of the poetry on these pages bore my fucking balls off,too many people caught up in their own petty issues and dramas,writing the same fucking tripe every time ,you know get fucking over it and wake up to the world.Nice one .If you want ,check out my pieces.Peace." -- Stuart Eric Longridge, Belfast.
"I thought that the first one was bad, so i thought you might have a recovery on this one, but i was definately wrong! this one sucks even worse. i dont know what kind of a poet you are or claim to be but you surely suck big cock. i feel sorry for you and your tries at being a poet. i wonder what kind of a loser you really are and if you even have a girlfirend. because crap like this would surely keep the gals away!" -- Richard, RIchardson, Tenn, USA.
"I think being a dickhead... like richard is more likely to keep girls away" -- Sarah.
"Well it's nice to see Richard has tons of fans, just like The Birdman. LOL. I really didn't like this either, to tell you the truth. What's really funny tough is how The Birdman claims to be loving and compassionate and then he drops the f bomb in the first line of his poem/rap. LOL " -- Steven.


Never Let Me Go by Rae (9)
"Great song, Rae!!! Only one small typo, line five, "sound" is repeated, unless that was intentional!" -- Judith.
"thanks judith, i'm glad you like it. i'll fix the typo!" -- rae.
"Very nice I play guitar and i could totally hear this one...good job Rae." -- Michelle.
"From a fellow artist's point of view, I say - "ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL", from a boyfriend's point of view - "I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!"" -- Dennis Kanan.
"thanks Michelle and Dennis... definitely pleased that all of you like it, these are flattering compliments from some of the most talented writers here. (and i love you too!) " -- rae.
"AWWWWWWWWWW Dennis and Rae...you two are so cute not to mention talented. " -- Michelle.
"ive been going through such a time like that... this song brought tears to my eyes. i could almost hear the music, and even without it, it meant so much... have you gotten any of this published?" -- lindsay, MO.
"i'm glad you can relate to it :) i wish i had some of it published.. alas.. still awaiting the day. thanks for review" -- rae.
"Beautiful." -- Josh / Axey.


Post World Comas Past by Stuart Eric Longridge (3)
"Wow!Im sort of thinking that you were around in the 60s,and that you might have did a little damage to your rational thinking.Please take that as a compliment.I think this is fantastic ,are you in touch with the shining ? Ones or are you smoking man?I hope your friends band are good to compliment this piece,you really are a cadet.Peace brother" -- Texas Tom, Land of the free.
"Stuart ... this is very powerful. My only suggestion is a quick edit for spelling ... great lyrics!!!" -- Judith Goff.
"great mate,just great. me and the ging man are going to starty jamming whe i go back,so these words will take on a new life! one love to texas tom by the way,he knows what time it is. "when we were young, way back when, you didnt even know how to hold a pen" cheers" -- rimm, london, engerlannd!, britain.


Getting Ahead by Rae (4)
"Please capitalize the "I"s. If you want the "I" to remain small to demonstrate insignificance, then I would capitalize mother. One or the other needs to be "superior" in this piece. I hate it, which is what makes it sooooooo good." -- Sylvia.
"thanks for the advice, Sylvia, i'll change it" -- rae.
"Better. Looks like you are closer to that forgiving thing. She doesn't have to understand what she did wrong for you to forgive her doing it. Sorry about getting personal here." -- Sylvia.
"forgiveness is a very tough thing to get around to... but understanding is even tougher. sometimes you just gotta let things go.. and don't worry about getting personal :) " -- rae.


Useless by Matthew Mercieca (2)
"I'd love to say anything constructive about this song, but it sounds like something from the early 70s. It doesn't flow very well and it is poorly written... Try harder!" -- Reagan Rothe, Houston, TX, USA.
"this was crap!i would never want to hear the tunes of this one!it's a little bit gay. not gay has in happy. u know what i mean." -- shawn w, jamaica.


I'll Always Be Around by David W Ledger (1)
"SOMEWHAT BORING! com...on! it is so drawn out and stupid." -- shawn w, Jamaica.


I Feel Like Ive Missed Someone Ive Never Met by Stuart Eric Longridge (1)
"I like this a lot!! Reminds me of a sortof gothic punk song. Very nicely worded!!!!!!!!!!!" -- Michelle.


Broken Tears by Rae (4)
"More, more.....!!!" -- Michelle.
"Beautiful talent. Great piece. . . (But I still hate u ;) )" -- Dennis Kanan.
"thanks to both of you (..but stop hating me, jerk..)" -- Rae.
"That hit home, well done. You are so unbelievably talented :)" -- Josh / Axey.


Money Can't Get Love by Cass (1)
"rhyming verse won't cost you even a penny." -- Brian O Neil.


I Want To Be With You by Karina Lizet Perez (2)
"Wow this song hit the spot on how i felt a yr ago when my gf broke up with me and i really loved her with all my heart. Ithink this is a wonderful song, because it tells the truth on the feelings that you have when you can't have someone no more. Wonderful!!" -- Josh, Stewartville, MN, USA.
"i don't really know you but it sounds good!! don't hold back on ur dreams, let them go wild.It really seems like you like this and i can't wait to see you on ster seadch" -- Emily, San Jose, CA, U.S.A..


I Think Of Life by Karina Lizet Perez (2)
"deep,i feel it, real deep. keep on writting. u know who it is spida." -- sPiDa, freeport, grandbahama, bahamas.
"if you callit a song, then you must rhyme each stanza or call it what it is, poetry." -- Brian O Neil.


Forgotten by Cass (1)
"Great ending Cass! I love it!" -- JM.


Don't Lie by Karina Lizet Perez (1)
"but u are hot" -- adam, glenfields.


Different by Cass (1)
"Wow,i really like it....good xpression but i thnk u should be li'l more attentive on the factor of continuity! anywayz , its worth-reading." -- Fizza Rahman, Karachi, Pakistan.


A Place Of Darkness by Karina Lizet Perez (11)
"Very good work. It is very well written and I can totally see it as a song on the lines of Boxcar Racer, Blink 182 or Sum41. " -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"Good work, well written, could definitely see this one on the charts !!! " -- Judith .
"YEAH KARINA!! U GO GRRL!!! THEY ARE ALL GOOD!!!!!! :):)" -- Kristen, Nipawin, SASK, Canada.
"KArina I think u have a lot a talent and I hope ur dream come true and I'm very fortunate to be ur friend, so keep going gurl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" -- Vanessa.
"hi karina, i think you would make a really good song writter keep on doing it ok bye tals to you later" -- Anakaren.
"I love this song!!!" -- Bianca, National City, CA, USA.
"I like this song a lot, like I've told you a long time ago. I like the subject ad the words you're using. And "dark room"..... lol" -- John Goedhart, Amsterdam, NH, the Netherlands.
"very very good very enerjetic writing good lyrics" -- josh, tehachapi, ca, usa.
"yo karina, your song is very creative, fa real, please perform it in the bahamas, sometime. u gat alot of skillz. keep workin hard and u'll get there. nuff love from your new bahamian fan. spida (g.c) BIGG UP BOOP!" -- sPiDa, freeprt, BAHAMAS, BaHaMaS.
"You have a lot of songs you've written! I wish I could write like you. I think your song is nice but it's more poetic than lyrical. In terms of structure it's hard to get some understanding as to where the verse leaves off and the chorus begans or whether it's a ABAB, AABA or what or a song with a two-line bridge thrown in! Sounds personal to me, poetic however. " -- Wesley McCants, Cincinnati, Ohio, USA.
"Titles and organization is there, but without rhyme it is not a lyric...I don't make the rules, but that's the biggest one among others, that are not present in the bodies of your work...a chorus which must include the title.These are the criteria set by the music industry, but if you only want to be a "Mania" writer, it doesn't matter." -- Brian O Neil.


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