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I Haven't Got The Heart by Chuk H MacDonald (1)
"I like this song. The words flow very well and everybody can relate to the message. Love is hard." -- Nick Marshburn.


Deeper In Life by Steph Kidd (1)
"Hey, Steph. Awesome piece. I feel this way a lot, too. Thanks for sharing your soul with others who commiserate and understand and sympathize. Love and peace." -- Desi.


All I Need by Desi Williams (3)
"So majorly l33t, lol. This is great Desi, absolutely great, i wish i could add some muzik to it. !!! keep writing desi =D" -- Josh / AxeY.
"Good song but try diffrent styles then other bands Keep writing" -- Scotty.
"Good song, good feel to it, expression, the mood the scream - yes l think that it is very good!" -- Amy, London, UK.


You Helped Me Through by Breanna N Porrett (1)
"hi.. nice idea.. good flow.. could change gender and make it harder rock without changing the feel. keep up the great work" -- Tim, calgary, alberta, canada.


What's Real?! by Josh Anderson (6)
"Meaningful:) " -- Hugh.
"I hope so!, thnx mate, thumbs up :)" -- Josh / AxeY.
"Great stuff :)" -- Rebecca.
"THANKS :D, i really had to write this, coz i just... had to. :D Kind Regards, Josh" -- Josh / AxeY.
"brilliant :-) well done very powerful n meaningful" -- baker.
"Thanks =D" -- Josh / AxeY.


We're Only by Matteo Hodak (2)
"Everyone searches for that one true love, and this song mainly just says that there aint such thing as a true love when your young and im sure he will make a song similar to this when he gets older " -- Annett, Sydney, Australia.
"'After being in relationship with Wilson for seven years,he broke up with me, I did everything possible to bring him back but all was in vain, I wanted him back so much because of the love I have for him, I begged him with everything, I made promises but he refused. I explained my problem to someone online and she suggested that I should contact a spell caster that could help me cast a spell to bring him back but I am the type that don't believed in spell, I had no choice than to try it, I meant a spell caster called Dr Zuma zuk and I email him, and he told me there was no problem that everything will be okay before three days, that my ex will return to me before three days, he cast the spell and surprisingly in the second day, it was around 4pm. My ex called me, I was so surprised, I answered the call and all he said was that he was so sorry for everything that happened, that he wanted me to return to him, that he loves me so much. I was so happy and went to him, that was how we started living together happily again. Since then, I have made promise that anybody I know that have a relationship problem, I would be of help to such person by referring him or her to the only real and powerful spell caster who helped me with my own problem and who is different from all the fake ones out there. Anybody could need the help of the spell caster, his email: [email protected] or call him +2349055637784 you can email him if you need his assistance in your relationship or anything. CONTACT HIM NOW FOR SOLUTION TO ALL YOUR PROBLEMS'" -- Jessica, Texas, Texas, USA.


Wasting Away by Marissa Gelardo (3)
"Very Wicked Song!!! Your lyrics are da bomb! You seem a lil weird, but hey....Were All WEIRD!!!!" -- Josh.
"I like the lyrics and I can see some Linkin Park in it. You've got some grammatical errors here though. Might want to correct those because it takes away from an otherwise nice piece." -- km.
"Great song, i can also see some LP in it. I love em, keep writing so i can enjoy more :D, kind regards, Josh" -- Josh / Axey.


The Way You Make Me Feel by Matteo Hodak (2)
"Hi, This song is the best, even though it is unbelievably sad, it says alot about what Matteo experienced and for anyone to go through such a thing and then write about it, I think is just great...." -- Kate Richards, Sydney, Australia.
"This is a really nice song, I actually felt really sad while reading this coz no one could have just thought this up, they would have to have actually lived the moment......Probably one of the best songs I have seen on the site in past 2 years since i first visited this site" -- Lucinda, London, England.


The Long Goodbye by Matteo Hodak (1)
"This is a very sad song, it brought a tear to my eye, but the lyrics are really good and it shows that he has experienced this" -- Sandra, Berlin, Germany.


The Long And Winding Journey by Matteo Hodak (2)
"This guy sounds like he has had a bit of practice at song writing and I dont believe it was easy, I'm in a band and writing songs is very difficult.......We might even turn to Matteo to write us a few songs" -- Frankie, Northampton, England.
"This dude is pro, He should sing this song cos im sure it would do very well here and he has the looks to match as well" -- Rachel, Brisbane, QLD, Australia.


Surreal Awakening by Desi Williams (2)
"Holy shnit, Desi, i really loved this poem, reall, really loved this poem. Well done." -- Josh / AxeY.
"Great song, I liked how there wasn't one definite chorus and it had a nice flow and great lyrics" -- Rebecca.


Shoebox Of Memories by Steph Kidd (4)
"Good work, I liked this :) the only thing i would change is instead of "did we lose it all somewhere or were you ever really there" i would have "did we lose it all somewhere or where you never really there" makes more sense. Great work esp. for 14 :)" -- Rebecca.
"hey hey, deep steph...wow, its awesome...it reminds me of sum1...haha but i really like it, it touched me...lol " -- sierra, corbin, ky, 40701.
"great stuff.. you should sell songs for sure..tim" -- tim, calgary, alberta, canada.
"i love this song it just rocks lol" -- sammy, Barnsley, England, United Kingdom.


Reality Hits Hard by Steph Kidd (4)
"i like this piece,very original.do you play guitar too?or are you strictly lyrycist,either way good job anyhow." -- Brian L.
"LOVE IT! I love how u can take anything and turn it into kick butt lyrics! I'd be happy to share some more with u if they're all gonna turn out that great! U make me look good ;) u rock!" -- Megan L..
"Not as good as your others but ok" -- Davey.
"this is truly great.. right on topic.. could bang it out" -- tim, calgary, alberta, canada.


My Demon by Marissa Gelardo (3)
"Love the lyrics, nice song." -- Josh / Axey.
"wow.. great stuff. im an old gezzer but i know the same demon" -- tim, calgary, alberta, canada.
"Its AWESOME! I love the lyrics, keep em' coming!!!!" -- Ryuichi.


Like Sugar And Cream by Amarjit Bhambra (2)
"What inspires you to write these love songs/poems...is it your partner??" -- Jennifer, London, UK.
"Hi Jennifer, thanks for taking time to read, Answer:Love, Love inspires me to write my poems and songs and Moods of the mind, like anything else in the World, either you hate it or Love it. I have one life long partner, like any one else sometimes we are in bad mood but we both know that love is always there - no matter what." -- Amy, Hayes , Britain.


Like A New Disease by Josh Anderson (2)
"wow... dats fukn awesum :) i really like it lol you've got really good wording..." -- Amy Anderson, Australia.
"Thanks :)" -- Josh / AxeY.


If You Wanna Dance by Breanna N Porrett (1)
"ok..what is w/ the song? now come on! please! this makes no since!!! Find a new song..along with your other ones! Oh huge tip: dont put your name in there! It makes it sound like the song is all about you! " -- Unknown.


Honey by Rosales (2)
"Great song...first attempt?" -- km.
"buy a car used car new car car dealer auto purchase car quote" -- Stymnesara, puerto galera, Philippines, Philippines.


Forever In Your Heart by Matteo Hodak (2)
"This is quite a sad song but is nice at the same time, I think it would be great if someone actually sang this song because I'm certain alot of people would like it" -- Tanya, Liverpool, England.
"This guy is quite smart, he has taken bits and pieces from Ronan Keating's song " If Tomorrow Never Comes " and mixed and added words in to make it sound different but delivers the same message as Ronan, But either way, It's a bloody good song." -- Mark Slater, Bradford, UK.


Epiphany by Brian C Lebron (8)
"Nice...i can almost hear it" -- km.
"Yeah,it's something i was working on at work.I'm gonna record it eventually.Thanx,I'm glad you liked it." -- Brian L.
"I agree with Km, you can feel the rythym and almost hear the song. Great :)" -- Rebecca.
"I want to say thanks to you both.I was kind of skeptical at first about submitting this piece.With some people it's kind of a touchy subject,almost taboo like,if you know what I mean." -- Brian L.
"i like this. excellent imagery and i would like to see more work like this on storymania. christ did die for our sins. it is not some myth, He is the only truth." -- nick marshburn.
"I couldn't have said it better myself Nick.It's nice to know I have friend of a friend in Christ." -- Brian L.
"Beautiful. I love it when people express their feelings about religion. Christ is wonderful. God bless you." -- Desi.
"Thanx,Desi." -- Brian L.


Don't Leave Me On My Own by Marissa Gelardo (1)
"Beautiful, great song. Nothing more to say, just beautiful." -- Josh / Axey.


Done With Me by Steph Kidd (7)
"Wicked song.Keep it up Steph!" -- Scotty.
"great work, i luv'd the song, i'd love to actually hear it, well done :-)" -- baker.
"hey,i agree with Scotty and David on this one good job Steph." -- Brian L.
"Got to agree with the other too, great work, nice flow and rythym" -- Rebecca.
"Beautiful. Really captures the essence of your subject. Nice rhythm like Rebecca said. Email me [email protected]" -- Desi.
"Beautiful. Really captures the essence of your subject. Nice rhythm like Rebecca said. Email me [email protected]" -- Desi.
"hey steph, yea this is a really great song, i love it...lol its awesome dog!! keep it up girl, ur doin good! lol" -- sierra jones, corbin, ky, 528-8595.


Bring You Down by Brian C Lebron (3)
"I liked it, a little short but I guess a few songs do have limited lyrics and focus more on instrumental impact. Either away I enjoyed it" -- Rebecca.
"Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading your work, after all your lovely comments on my work. I loved it, nice choice of words, and as to the length of the lyrics, i think its fine, take songs like "Thoughtless" and "floyd" for instance, they are shortly lyricised, but sung slowly, so that there is a nice impact. Great work, keep it up, cant wait to read more from you." -- Josh / Axey.
"hey thank you both for the positive feedback.I really didn't know how well this would go over.When it comes to songs I'm usually more critical.I'm my own worst critic." -- Brian L.


Autumn Breeze by Jeremy Ray Dunlap (4)
"like this one very much...some really nice lines here." -- km.
"I agree with km,very nice piece." -- Brian L.
"Thank you KM and Brian L. for your feedback. I appreciate it - Jeremy" -- Jeremy.
"I think this one is cool. You write very well. Keep up the good work. and say hi to Gena for me. :O and say hi to (Dad) - (Giles, bones in the closet)" -- Preston R. Giles, San Antonio, TX, Bexar.


A Million And One Tries by Melissa A Trahan (4)
"what a terrific work. stick with it, looks like a star in the making." -- curious.
"Thanks for the review curious. I am hoping to be a singer one day. I appreciate the support " -- melissa, Nottawa, Ontario, Canada.
"Beautiful, I like the positive attitude. You are very talented :)" -- Rebecca.
"Nice one :)" -- Ian Tronco.


It's Hard To Move A Mountain by Brion' O Neil (4)
"I like this one :)" -- km.
"good to have you back posting, Brian. As a black man...country's hard to bit into but i like the words to this song!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"I really admire your talent to write lyrics. Great job, one of my favorite so far. Yes, as rocco said, I like the words here." -- Dri.
"oh, I forgot to let you know that I'm glad that you are back " -- Dri.


Unplug Me by Josh Anderson (4)
"Wow. Josh, you have a gift. I haven't even looked at your other songs yet - this is the first since I discovered the site - but I must say, you write compelling works. I could hear the song in my head, and I wanted to be unplugged. I love the word usage, and the way you incorporate so many inspirations and depressing yet moving metaphors in your writing (believe me, for I know what depression is and the outcome of it). Brava! Continue to write. It soothes the savage beast in me, and it may do so for others as well." -- Desi Williams, Ferndale, WA, 98248.
"We're we seperated at birth? LOL, thanks Desi :D I look forward to reading your work." -- Josh / AxeY.
"Ramblings, poor language, and poor rhyme schemes; but a good poem I suppose." -- Harold.
"Well, i suppose thats a good thing =\ thanks for the review anyways." -- Josh / AxeY.


The Darkness (Song) by Josh Anderson (4)
" hmm....this one I truly like, the tone sounds somewhat of Slipknot's, that's awesome, keep it up :)" -- Katy, Tampa, Fla..
"Thanks, yeah it does have a slipknot vibe hey?" -- Josh / AxeY.
"i agree with katy. it's deffenetly something i like" -- Carla, Washington st..
"Why thank you =) and thanks for reading my work ^_^" -- Josh / AxeY.


Smudge by Josh Anderson (6)
"Nice rhythm but get a better rhyming pattern. For one so young you are advanced...keep writing " -- Brian O Neil.
"Hey,pretty good stuff, my nephew's writing style is very similar in alot of ways.I don't care what anybody says i like it." -- Brian L.
"Thanks Brian and Brian. This is actually different to my normal writing style, and i will try to heed your advice, i may try to re rhyme it some time down the track. Thanks for the support and feed back." -- Josh / AxeY.
"Josh, I admire your efforts but I can't help but notice all the names of other artists you give us to "put us in the correct mood" as it were. Lyrics are much more about finding your own path than taking the lead from others." -- kellie.
"I think it's fine to be influenced by other artists and even to use their names to help the audience get a better understanding of what a piece is like or should be like, but I understand what kellie is saying." -- Jerry St. George.
"Whilst i do agree with you kellie, for me, music is just as important as lyrics, music can set mood, attitude, can make you feel emotion just like lyrics, sorry if you don't agree, but take mozart or rob dougan for example. Thanks for the reviews, both kellie and jerry st. george." -- Josh / AxeY.


Just One More Kiss by Dri (9)
""This is beautiful....in this world of unsolved puzzles and quizzes for sure we miss kisses a lot"" -- roberto, berkeley, California, USA.
"Good job, I'll work on it!" -- Brian O Neil.
"thank you all. Yes, Brian, it would be nice if you could work on it. Thanks a lot." -- Dri.
"Great passion! I have to cool down a bit! Now, Dri, Emily wasn't this passionate! Good job!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Well, maybe because Emily wasn't half Italian and half Brazilian. Just kidding. Thanks, rocco, always nice hearing from you." -- Dri.
"a kiss is not just a kiss --yours are a bit hit" -- vernon.
"BIG hit i mean.......keep up the good work " -- vernon.
"Wow, this is sweet. Touching too, in a way. " -- Mandine.
"thanks, Mandine. Glad you enjoyed it." -- Dri.


Hide And Go Freak by Josh Anderson (2)
"Scary! Awesome! Both." -- Desi.
"Hehe, thanks, im glad, i was going for a really scary freaky vibe in it. Talk ya later!" -- Josh / AxeY.


Habits Are Hard To Break by Nash (2)
"This could be a pretty cool song. You play guitar?" -- km.
"Actually yes I do. I've been going crazy trying to write a part to it." -- Author.


Get Away From Me by Josh Anderson (1)
"I really enjoyed this song actually! I could see myself listening to it which doesnt happen often seeing as i am a harsh critic haha.. But I really enjoyed reading your lyrics it made me want to actually hear the song.. Nice job" -- Breanna, Ruby, MI.


Escape Esc by Josh Anderson (4)
"hey,heck of a job.i like it.are you strictly a songwriter or do you play guitar too?" -- Brian L.
"Thank you Brian, no i haven't really written many song, it's only the last few weeks ive had such inspiration. I usually write poetry. I don not play the guitar either, but i do sampling and scrathcin on vinyl (DJ if you will)" -- Josh / AxeY.
"beautiful. I wish I knew your secret. maybe i do. we may never know. keep writing. " -- Desi.
"Thanks Desi, e-mail me and we can talk bout things if u want." -- Josh / AxeY.


Because I Cry by Josh Anderson (6)
"Depressing song, and the words really do get at you. I don't normally like this type of lyrics (I'm usually too depressed already) but this one is pretty flowing and it's alright. " -- Mandine.
"Yeah, i suppose it is pretty sadening. Thank you for the review, it is so very appreciated. :) Kind Regards, Josh" -- Josh / AxeY.
"Depressing, but totally relative to my life as well as many other people's lives, probably. I like the flow, and the message you're conveying." -- Desi Williams, Ferndale, WA, United States.
"Thanks Desi :D. Sorry ur life is like that." -- Josh / AxeY.
"Hey mate, i can't really relate to this myself but i know there would be alot of people out there who would take comfort in this knowing they're not alone. " -- nick j.
"Thanks." -- Josh / AxeY.


A Fine Line by Brian C Lebron (2)
"this gave me goose bumps...beautiful!" -- km.
"Thanx,km for the good review,much appreciated." -- Brian L.


Looking For Water (In Joshua Tree) by Don Everett Pearce (1)
"nothing" -- wasi, karachi, pakistan.


Forever by Melonie M Brooks Hpf (3)
"I am not a big fan of fundamentalism and this just feels like another attempt to enforce christianity onto others. Pantheist myself. I only just realised that it was meant to be a song. As it is, seeing as I don't know the tune, I'm a bit lost - but I can see that you mean what you say and I'm not the offending type. Good luck." -- Jack Brown.
"Thank you for responding, but I have a question. What's Pantheist and what do they believe? I like to have knowledge of the other religions, it helps me understand things better and I do confess I hoped nobody would see it as an attempt to push my religion on others, but I hope people take it seriously all the same" -- Melonie M. Brooks, USA.
"Hey,nice job this kind of thing is so rare on here but it's nice to see.I believe in many things Christ being one of them." -- Brian L.


Forever (Author: James Fitzgerald) by James C Fitzgerald (1)
"Your writing style is very much like your father's, who correct me if I'm wrong has work posted on here too? MBJ" -- Mary Beth, Holland, OH.


Be This Way by Jannah Akira (2)
"hey girl, glad you are back." -- Dri.
"Thanks Dri. Miss ya all" -- Akira NJ.


The Pillow by Donna Leigh Dennison (3)
"Hi, its a very sweet love poem but lacks the flow, read it out loud to yourself and you will see where the changes need to be.Kindest regards Diana Venditti" -- Diana Venditti, Italy.
"I understand your point and thanks...but I hear it as a slow "ballad type" song and it doesn't sound so choppy....thanks. Donna Leigh" -- Donna.
"Sweet and sad, I like how the pillow was repeated and changed at the end of each verse." -- kavya.


Tell Me Why My Heart Hurts by Donna Leigh Dennison (2)
"Good country song but I got confused, what is the chorus? Got a tune yet?" -- kavya.
"Hi, being a country fan, yes it could be a good song, keep writing, theres always someone whos acid, roll with it,You should see what someone did to me the other day, said who gives a .... boring that was for The Boy King which tells a story, never mind,it was just one, and the way he wrote was as if................use imagination on the dots.Kind regards Diana" -- Diana Venditti, Italy.


My Heart Can Never Mend by Donna Leigh Dennison (1)
"Hi, sweet,pity cant hear the music that goes with it, regards Diana Venditti" -- Diana Vendittit , Italy.


Baby Please Don't Go by Donna Leigh Dennison (3)
"i really like this song, very descriptive. one thought (and please don't get mad) should the verse that ends you don't need me anymore be 'i don't need you anymore', seems that might be more in line with the rest but it still is good." -- echo.
"Thanks Echo and I see what you mean and it makes sense what you say, but I looked at it the other way .....me saying to him that he don't need me anymore"....(guess it was a way of making him feel bad, he's doing all the sobbing and having the regrets, I was just being a bitch and sarcastic)....does that make any sense.....thanks again..appreciate your input and info....take care" -- Donna Leigh, Alabama, USA.
"I thought it was excellent. worded realy well, with no forcing. Good job!" -- km.


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