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They Started A War by Randall Barfield -"One is left with the horrible feeling now that war settles nothing; that to win a war is a... [70 words]
Remembering by Colin Baker - [144 words]
A Pious Gent by Colin Baker - [11 words]
Rain Heading In From The West by Colin Baker A poem written to mark the many innocent deaths brought about by Western politica... [243 words]
The Love I Need by Dri - [236 words]
Entwined Hearts by Dri - [89 words]
Dad
(A)L(M)Ight(Y) by Buxton Read it, but don't love it. [113 words]
Your Fear by James Christopher McDermott - [90 words]
Yet Another Day... by Alvin Gladstone Another hectic day described in poetry. [185 words]
Who Said? by Yessayana Hartfield This poem is about courage and believing in yourself, when no one else believes in you, your parents,... [26 words]
What Are These? by Jacson A Bevens Can you tell? [53 words]
We're Both Drowning by Elizabeth Flores This is a poem I wrote just now. it took me about ten minutes so it might not be very good.... [66 words]
Was I Ever Once Worth The Time by M Q Walters Still trying to figure out what I'm worth....and why it seems to be easier for o... [75 words]
Waiting (2) by Ashley Burdett Just a poem about waiting for someone. [113 words]
Unexplanable by Carole Brogden This poem is about a time in my life when I wanted to do something but God didn't want me to and I... [119 words]
Umn Is All I Can Say by Yessayana Hartfield This poem is about handsom or beautiful women that make you Umn. [95 words]
Tiny Souls by Mary Tronti - [87 words]
The Wendy Williams Pu-Lease by Yessayana Hartfield A big Phat Shout Out to my girl Wendy Williams on her Pu-lease to the people who di... [203 words]
The Long Sleep That Steals Away Guilt by Uche Peter Umez Mirth gives way to dejection as a poet confronts his treachery and takes ... [129 words]
The Endless Struggle by Noah J A short poem/rap song about the World's problems. [290 words]
The Dibia's Lament by Uche Peter Umez Traditional values give way to modern acts. [111 words]
The Day The Levy Broke by Dawn Matley Maselli I am a RN in RI. I could not go to New Orleans to help, because people depend on my car... [776 words]
Taking Power by Suzannah Duff - [84 words]
Soul Meld by M Q Walters - [84 words]
Review ! A Myth.. by Sasu A blast at the lack of readers, but writers on this Forum. [108 words]
Reminiscences Of Nsukka by Uche Peter Umez Longing for a dearly beloved friend. [77 words]
Poems Of A Differant Tone by Delmar Burkett This is a few selection of poetry I've written throughout the basis of my life. [951 words]
Outside Your Window by Roberto J Moreno - [96 words]
Now And Never by Buxton - [53 words]
Love Prayers by Desi Williams It's... well, once you read it, it is self explanatory. [113 words]
Life Within by Inchara Its about the expectant mother-to-be. [98 words]
Just Not Today by Buxton - [121 words]
It by M Q Walters Just something different for me. [35 words]
It Was In The Middle Of Summer by Bancy Mwihaki Poem about love that was found then lost - poignant, nostalgic. [175 words]
It Is My Business by Yessayana Hartfield This poem is about other people business, but your own. [123 words]
Ich Leibe Dich Alexa by K H - [140 words]
I Shall... by Mary Tronti This little poem came to mind, as I was struggling to make it through the day with my illness. I giv... [65 words]
I Love My Lord by Bg Ryan - [104 words]
His Pain by Ken Harbec I am glad I had the chance to see his eyes that night. [20 words]
Guessing Game by Sasu - [109 words]
Free Sin by Buxton A poem short in words but big in heart. [30 words]
Fragments by Uche Peter Umez Memory of a life. [31 words]
For Dad by Katherine Smith - [130 words]
Follow Your Dreams by Dri - [119 words]
First Day Of My Life by David Baker It's been a loong time but i'm back hahaha, this is my newest poem, have a read hope u lik... [89 words]
Dying On My Knees by Aryka - [297 words]
Driving To Feel You Near by Roberto J Moreno - [146 words]
Dream Land by J R Eilerman It's my depiction of the reality of dreaming. [87 words]
Done With The Lies by Ashley Martin Something I wrote when I was bored, typical Girl is done with Guy, Guy won't let go though, ... [69 words]
Ciggaretts by Yessayana Hartfield A Health Hazard worst and costly then the most addictive drugs out in the market place to date. [296 words]
Brother My Brother by Deava Not entirely sure what inspired this, just something about the bond of brothers standing aga... [95 words]
Broken Beat by Tim D Ryan A pointless poem, but I like it. [195 words]
Begging Forgiveness by Rae - [60 words]
Autumn Winchester by Tim D Ryan Just lyrics for my band, that's all. [156 words]
Autumn Dream by Lissa N Metz-Gomez - [40 words]
Appreciation by Jacson A Bevens This concept just struck a chord inside of myself. [98 words]
A Winter Night Sky by Gerald Scruggs Encouragement. [235 words]
A Gust Of Wind(For Caillin) by Tyla B D D Kenzie This poem I wrote for my daughter Caillin.She is one of 4 children that I have, and... [206 words]

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TITLE (EDIT)
Dad
DESCRIPTION
This poem is about my dad, and how he let my step-mom take over. My brother and I moved out after having to dealing with 4 1/2 years of her of her bullshit. And I pray to god that she doesn't treat Taylor (my step-brother) the same. You’d need to know more information to truly understand the situation.
[126 words]
AUTHOR
Carla Thomson
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
hello everyone, i hope that you like my work.. i'm a 19 year old girl who uses writing as an outlet.. some of my work isn't the best but there's a few pieces out there worth reading.. i started writing these posts when i was 14.. and i haven't taken the time to weed out really anything that's a little dull.. well anyways.. hope you enjoy what you do read
*Smiles* always,
~Carla
[January 2009]
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
kitten_obsession@msn.com
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (105)
A Card For My Love (Poetry) Ok... this isn't a card I sent to anyone... and no one sent this to me... i wrote this for my art class and I thought it was good enough to post,,, so what do you think? [92 words]
A Fleck Of Sand (Poetry) - [115 words]
A Letter To You (Poetry) It's a letter to the only guy I've ever loved. it's letting him know how I feel, an opology, and letting him know that I've changed.... well read the thing... what do get out of it?... i never did sen... [232 words]
A Place In My Memories (Poetry) - [84 words]
Alarm Clock (Poetry) - [91 words]
Another Long Summer (Poetry) What can I say summer can be boring when all your friends are out of town. [232 words] [Teenage]
Can't Get Away (Poetry) - [78 words]
Class After Lunch (Poetry) - [134 words]
Confused (Poetry) - [19 words]
Congratulations (Poetry) I wrote this for an art project at school... we have to make 3-4 card and this was one of them.. hope you like it... and I hope my teacher does too...lol. [55 words]
Crying At Night (Poetry) - [62 words]
Cute Little Kids (Poetry) - [63 words]
Dear Friend (Songs) - [167 words]
Do I? (Poetry) - [102 words]
Do You Really Like Me? (Poetry) - [114 words]
Drama (Poetry) - [68 words]
Drea (Poetry) - [209 words]
Dumped For The First Time (Poetry) - [134 words]
Empty Room (Songs) - [116 words]
Everyone's Crap (Poetry) - [249 words]
Expanding My Horizon (Poetry) - [164 words]
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Flash-Backs (Songs) This is a country song that I wrote on the date of: 10-24-04. [165 words]
Fly Like A Sparrow (Poetry) - [64 words]
Friday Afternoon (Songs) This song is kinda jazzy. if you just read it can sound depressing. but it sounds kool when its being sung. [99 words]
Get Out Of My Head (Poetry) - [205 words]
Getting Back On Track (Poetry) - [98 words]
God Please Help Me (Poetry) - [51 words]
Hidden Beauty (Poetry) - [121 words]
Hope You're Lucky (Poetry) - [77 words]
How Do I Say It? (Poetry) - [133 words]
I Feel So Used (Poetry) - [116 words]
If You Were Here (Poetry) - [56 words]
I'll Try For You (Poetry) - [117 words]
I'm A Bitch! (Poetry) ok... this is about me, how i lost my verginaty to my friend's guy, and how i feel about that... [297 words]
It's My Birthday! (Poetry) I just wrote it... tell me what you think... I think it get's a little of the subject... all well... hope you enjoy it [198 words]
It's Not All About Sex (Non-Fiction) You'll find out. [383 words]
It's Only A Dream (Poetry) - [77 words]
Just Hold Me (Songs) - [156 words]
Just Respect Me (Poetry) Guys annoy me when they don't know how to show respect... what else can I say... they piss me off. [99 words]
Kid Without A Clue (Poetry) - [55 words]
Lets Clean The Slate (Poetry) Something I just wrote.. I see more than one meaning in it.. well it's here for everyone to enjoy... would love some feed back... keep on smiling... because smiles sure make my day! [91 words]
Life Wasted Sitting (Poetry) - [99 words]
Looking Back At You (Poetry) This is about a person that I spent a lot of time with last summer. i don't think that the title really fits this poem.. but it's gunna have to do until I think of somethink else. [141 words]
Matthew (Poetry) Well you know who you are.. lol i just read your poem... I thought you'd like a poem more than a review... you write for me so just thought I could write a little something for you... it's a I had tro... [122 words]
Maybe More Than A Friend (Poetry) - [60 words]
Midnight Rain (Poetry) I wrote it last night and would love some feedback... anything would good. [148 words]
Missing You Still (Poetry) The only guy i've ever loved... thinking about him still... I left him about a year ago... [129 words]
My Parents And Myself (Non-Fiction) It's basicly me bitching about my parents. [1,277 words] [Teenage]
My Second Chance (Poetry) - [115 words]
My Writing Lately (Poetry) It sucks [145 words]
Nature Of The Seasons (Poetry) - [62 words] [Nature]
No More Creeps For Me (Poetry) - [78 words]
One Of My Prayers (Poetry) I just started to write what I was feeling and as I wrote I was prying... I guess I just don't know what I want really... I just pray that God will take the hurt away. [301 words]
Only Curious (Poetry) - [122 words]
Picture (Poetry) - [101 words]
Please Smile For Me (Poetry) - [87 words]
Praising Him (Poetry) - [100 words]
Quinton (Poetry) - [194 words] [Relationships]
Rejection (Poetry) - [107 words]
Restless Slumber (Poetry) - [74 words]
Scorpio (Poetry) - [116 words]
Shocked (Poetry) - [74 words]
Should I Let You In (Songs) A slow rock song. [123 words]
Sitting Alone (Songs) A country song. well its just something I came up with thinking of other peoples' lives. it has nothing to do with me, but there are people out there that have to deal with what I wrote. [146 words]
Someone (Poetry) Someone that I knew back in middle school... I just want to get to know him better... he'd a good friend... now all you readers don't get the wrong idea... ok if you want to you can... but that is not... [100 words]
Still Waiting (Poetry) - [95 words]
Stop Looking To The Skies (Poetry) - [45 words]
Stress (Poetry) - [302 words]
The Age Of The Less Forgotten (Poetry) I don’t really understand it, even though I wrote it. these words just came to me; so I wrote them down. maybe someone can tell me what it really means… because I’m really at a loss here. [83 words]
The Break Up (Poetry) - [126 words]
The Girl In The Corner (Poetry) - [89 words]
The Joy Of A Teen's Room (Poetry) Well... my room is one of those kool attic rooms... when i'm done painting it it's going to be spiffy cool with tuns of different colors.... well I don't usually keep my room a mess but i've been bizz... [158 words]
The Outside (Poetry) - [100 words]
The Things We Go Through (Poetry) The person that this is talking about is me... when it says "you" it's talking about me. [171 words]
The Way That I See It (Poetry) - [120 words]
They Said They Wouldn't (Poetry) - [79 words]
Thinking Of My Past (Poetry) - [81 words]
Thinking Of Yashua (Poetry) What do yhou think?... it's just somthing that kind of came to me... didn't spend a whole lot of time on it... i'd like some feedback. [159 words]
This Weekend (Poetry) - [242 words]
Thoughts On Life (Poetry) Thoughts and questions about life... stuff I was thinking about [189 words]
Time To Smile (Poetry) - [71 words]
Tk (Poetry) - [204 words]
Turn Down The Sound (Poetry) - [62 words]
Val (Poetry) - [85 words]
Walked Around Town (Songs) - [115 words]
Wanting Something (Poetry) Just something I wrote... I don't know. [113 words]
What Do I Want? (Poetry) - [137 words]
When It Knocks (Poetry) - [90 words]
Where Is It? (Poetry) - [53 words]
Where My Thoughts Lay (Poetry) this is about my ex-fiancé and myself ... a little bit of what i'm feeling right now i couldn't really think of a title that suits this poem [139 words]
Why Am I Single? (Poetry) - [116 words]
Winter's Trees (Poetry) - [20 words]
Wish To Be A Child (Poetry) - [185 words]
Writer's Block (Poetry) - [71 words]
Yet Another Ending (Poetry) more like a letter than a poem... an ending of a sexual friendship with an ex... an ex that's hard to let go of, yet seems to know how to break a girls heart time and time again.. so it's my turn to d... [206 words]
You Are There (Songs) Well it's a song I just wrote... I might add one more verse... [49 words]
You Her And Me (Poetry) - [183 words]
You Love Her (Poetry) - [120 words]
You Need A Beating! (Poetry) - [142 words]
.Always There. (Songs) This is a song that I wrote last summer... I'm just now getting to put it on this site... lol... I hope you enjoy it! [151 words]
.Just Let Me Be. (Poetry) - [221 words] [Teenage]
.Moving On. (Poetry) - [100 words]
.The Beach. (Songs) A countryish song. [125 words]
.Why Do You Hide Me?. (Poetry) - [102 words]
Dad
Carla Thomson

every time i talk to you
every time we meet
something reminds me of how it was before
i have flash-backs
and disterbing thoughts
i start to feel depressed
it sturs up the hurts inside me
and i think of why things had to happen like that
i love you, yet i hate you
i can't stand being around you,
after you let everything happen.
you would let her rewen our lives,
you whatched it happen some of the time
but when you were at work you didn't realize how bad it was
you only knew what she told you
i don't know why you loved that bitch
she controled your life
you'd always get in fights, almost every night, and she would always get her way
she had control over you and still does to this day
even though it drove your kids away

      

 

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"As someone who lost a dad at about your age, this was a bit hard for me. Perhaps because I sense anger. And that is an emotion I think I only felt once towards my dad. He died a long time ago, and my heart longs for his love still. It is good that you have chosen an outlet such as writing to express your feelings. I only ask that you remember words and actions can never be taken back. I hope this all works out for you. It is hard to see "them" as people at this age...still trying to figure out who you are yourself." -- mattie.
"Dear Carla,I too lost a father when I was your age but he didn't pass away.My mother divorced him and when he walked out on my mother he walked out on me as well.So I can definately understand the anger you feel for your dad.I hope you continue to express your feelings through your poetry and I hope that one day all will be well with your dad." -- David D.
"my dad did not pass away, and yes i am angry because of the things that happend, the things i know he could chang but didn't.i love my dad how could i not, but thinking of him brings me pain. he let his wife hurt us, my brother and i. i know he could have stopped it but she had too much controle and i have the right to call her a bitch because that is what she is. it's been 3 to 4 years since i left my dad's house and what happend there haunts me still and i'm trieng so hard to forgive. i can't explain execty what i've gone through in a way it makes sence, but for the time being i want nothing to do with "them"." -- Carla.
"Wow, what a heartfelt poem. My heart goes out to you. We never really understand when a family member chooses a stranger over us do we? Love the poem, keep writing :)" -- Tamsin Butler.
"Hi,Some people do anything to fight over to get what they want in what they call love, and they use any excuse and lies to do so. I do feel sorry for you, and know where you are comming from. Keep writing and may God Bless you. Some people to do want to accept what comes on the plate with the rest of that love. " -- Sam, Auck,, N. Zealand.

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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
November 2005
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