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Let's compare notes on our moms and dads...
Just another human being, or maybe an alien, i'm not sure, why dont u bend over and find out.
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man look at this story. its all fucked up.
the girl gets raped by her dad or somebody, but this fucker never out loud says it.
its all innuendo.
well thats what makes a story good.
yeah...but i keep on feeling like he may be the perpetrator of the shit himself. who
the hell could write sick shit like this so graphically, unless it had happened to
them or they were doing it.
what do you care?
well i care...about human suffering.
nah i mean...ur right i dont care, but im like especially sensitive to domestic
violence situations. if a story, say by a girl, has her being all depressed and
saying stuff like 'nobody likes me' i automatically think her dad's raping her or is
close to raping her...
whats the morbid interest in domestic violence? it happens to everyone right?
domestic violence doesnt happen to everyone...anyway what the hell do you mean by
domestic violence...getting slapped once in a while?
nah thats normal, every kid gets hit once in a while.
ahha, what if your like 14 and you talk back and the old man slaps you so hard that
you hear bells ringing.
yeah, but its all shock and usually its a once of deal.
yeah but there's psychic damage...
fuck psychic damage....there's a difference between your old man beating you up
routinely, but if its just like once every 3 months he slaps....
what about punches to the stomach and kicks...
look...the issue is at what point these slaps and kicks ...what your dad kicked
nah nah man....but i think i know someone who got kicked by their dad.
hold on now, this is all bullshit, why are u so interested in domestic violence.
ah u know, just thinking about what other kids go through, compare notes...
cmon man u can tell me.
tell you what?
u just said ur dad kicked u.
i did not.
and you always imagine depressed girls must be getting raped...
well thats extreme...its just that having a dick up ur arse and the weight of ur dad
crushing you, breathing all over you...
man, that sounds like a masturbation fantasy...
no faggot...i mean there's the reverse too. a friend of mine really hated his mom.
all he would say is his dad was not home much and that his mom was always calling him
its not just rape, theirs all kinds of mental trauma out there. dad and mom always
yelling at you, telling u your worthless or do everything wrong, never hugging
is your mom and dad like that?
fuck you thats private stuff.
cmon you can tell me. let me heal that psychic trauma!!!!!
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"this is sick garbage, you need to get a life instead of writing something you know nothing about.pj" -- PJ.
"Come on PJ, are you a sleep in this World. Things like this do happen - If the above is true - its good to get it out of the system. True or Not - there is an ulgly side of the World too. Sunny, parents are met to protect you but some are twisted and they twist the lives of their own anyways whatever, good read. Recently l have come across young girls who do complain that they moms no longer hug them. You are very realistic in writing the above. Just a little hugs goes a mile." -- carol, Auckland, New Zealand.
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