AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (8) A New Dawn (Short Stories) When life seems hopeless, there always something, no matter how small to cling to [1,636 words] [Drama] Childhood Dreams (Short Stories) This is a short piece for those who fondly remember the past and try to relive it as often as they can. [288 words] [Mind] Comfort For None (Short Stories) This story is inspired by the sadness of abuse in the family and the effect on those concerned. [326 words] Love For An Hour (Short Stories) This is a very short, sad story of modern love and how easy it is to "love without loving" [146 words] Paradise Relived (Short Stories) This is a short emotional story of the full cycle of love. [1,534 words] [Drama] Quiet Seduction (Short Stories) A short tale of nocturnal seduction [137 words] The Greatest Show On Earth (Essays) A comment on how the public fuel war by supporting the big businesses and media giants that promote it. [390 words] The Sound Of Lovers (Poetry) A look at the sadness of lonliness against the contrast of love [147 words]
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"Although I've seen your name and work before on the Storymania site, I don't believe I've ever commented on it before. Allow me to correct that, hopefully in some constructive capacity. I wanted to point out that I could detect little wrong with it, and that's a very high compliment coming from someone like me, who likes to help people by finding fault with a work and then destroying that fault in an attempt to make a stronger work. I should point out that this sentence part, taken out of context, should be corrected, and can easily be done so in one of two ways. First the sentence fragment, which I'll put in quotation marks, and then I'll follow with two possible corrections. "total comfort and everything that I do." Correction #1 "I move through her streets with ease and total comfort 'in' everything (delete following word)that I do." Correction #2 "I move through her streets with ease and total comfort 'with' everything that I do." I won't go any further. There'd be little point in trying to find further fault with this magnificent work. Any other commentary I can make will be useless to you, but all the same, I will say that I too have recently completed a short story set in Africa as well, in the Sudan as well. I'm afraid mine pales in comparison to your finely rendered illustration.--The Advisor" -- JA St.George.
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