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its about this guy im going out with, we have been going out for half a year but its getting to serious, im in too deep to tell him how i feel so i let my feelings come out through my songs. [326 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
i have written one of other peice which is a song called in to deep, i like writing songs and poems in my spare time, they help me get through, one day i hope to be a singer/songwriter. [August 2008]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Dear Dad (Poetry) my dad, who i dont see anymore,he has a new family now, two girls and wife and i havent seen him in over two years, i hope he is happy wherever he is. [260 words]
Am I In To Deep? Laura M
AM I IN TO DEEP BY LAURA M
i think im going to write this to let my feelings out, wanna avoid the arguing, cos i hate it when we shout at one another. you say im your lover and we should be together forever but i cant see that anymore its like someone has opened the wrong door, and im realising what we promised what we said isnt possible, it cant be done im sorry to say to you but your not going to be the only one, im far to young to complicate things with this maturity yes its getting far to mature for me physically and emotionally wanna let you know, but im scared, am i in too deep?
i cant sleep cos i dont know what to say to you i cant breathe cos i dont know who to turn too. dont want to hurt you or bring you down, this relationship is the reason for my frown.
i dont think i can promise much more to you, its burrying me deeper than i want to be burried. the reason i cant promise you is cos they get broken everytime i do, when we started out being with you was fine now its just a let down and i cant understand why you want to be mine persuading with poetry and how you really feel you say you feel so strongly about me, but its getting too much lately, i cant stand another day like this.
i cant sleep cos i dont know what to say to you i cant breathe cos i dont know who to turn too. dont want to hurt you or bring you down, this relationship is the reason for my frown.
poetry and love and all that stuff its just getting to much, want to be on my own for a while im just too young for this maturity this emotion and arguing its all to much for me, and im writing this down with the frown my face, thinking about the smile upon yours whenever i see you, i dont want to hurt you or bring you down oh i dont want to hurt you or bring you down, but i got to tell you sooner or later this relationship is the reason for my frown.
wanna let you know, but im in too deep.
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"Wow, i love this song, feels like i really know you! baha." -- Emoosh,, London, ?, England.
"OMG! I totally know how you feel. You obviously are good at pouring your feelings into your songs. My only suggestion(if I had to have one) is that you shouldn't repeat yourself so much. Still, great job!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA.
""I'm just too young for this maturity" is a great line. Keep writing..........................peace!" -- Richard Evans.
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