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TITLE (EDIT)
Forever Us (Chapter One.)
DESCRIPTION
Seventeen year old Ashlyn McGregor is stuck in the small, fictional town of Selmer, Colorado, desperately wishing she could meet the woman who gave her life. She was adopted as an infant by her sort-of-mom Leah, and though she loves her, it's not the same for Ashlyn. She wants the comfort of knowing her real mother.
As time passes, she falls in love with the boy-next-door best friend, and they become an item. But when her entire world collapses around her, how is she supposed to handle it?
She's alone.
(Note: Starts out a little slow and off topic, sorry. I was hoping that's where I could get some help... I don't know if I should rewrite the first few chapters, or what.)
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TITLE KEYWORD
Teenage
AUTHOR
S M Kivela
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
I'm a young, creative writer just wanting some honest feedback. Love to talk and meet people, also love humour! Will edit your work, definitely. I love reading new things by aspiring authors such as myself :)
[January 2010]
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"Wow - must admit that I did think - uh oh more teen fiction but when I started reading it I was gripped - please write more! One minor criticism is to check how many times you remind the reader of the abandoned mother (the sentence about '...if you'd forgotten') might be seen as repetetive. Apart from that it's excellently written, gripping and grabs your attention from the start!" -- Briony.

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© 2009 S M Kivela
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2010
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