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Kissed By An Angel. David Baker
A short but deathly blackout,
a red light up ahead.
On-coming traffic,
i was certain we were dead.
The brakes began to cry,
the noise pulsated in my head.
Propelled toward the window,
i was certain we were dead.
Nothing could i do,
except to close my eyes,
and ask the angels to stop our car,
i didn't want to die.
I wanted one more chance,
to make everthing right.
I wanted to tell you how i feel,
just a chance to hold you tight.
My life didn't flash before me,
i didn't see a light.
Was this truly the angels given sign,
that i was going to be alright.
My eyes remained up-open,
as the noise ceased to exist.
As silence filled my every thaught,
i wondered if i'd be missed.
The smell of burning rubber,
burnt inside my nose.
The sweet sound of my brothers voice,
my eyes no longer closed.
Laughter filled our bodies,
as tears fell from our eyes.
We'd just been kissed by an angel,
yes, we were alive.
I have been given one more chance,
i'm going to make things right,
i'm going to tell you how i feel,
i'm going to hold you tight.
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"hey david, that's some powerful stuff! was this a real incident? i think many of us have been there so can relate to what its like" -- jersey mike, belgium.
"Nice work Baker!! Loved this one, the rhyme worked well in it. Had a nice flow. Great!" -- Rebecca.
"yeh it was a real incident, hepened bout 2 weeks ago coming home. it was soo scary, bro just had a blackout only for prob a second n he didn't see the red light, lucky i was awake lol luckily we stopped though, another fraction of a second longer n u may not have read that poem lol... thanx for the feedback..... :-) " -- baker .
"Hi David, well done , great poem,Diana Venditti" -- Diana Venditti, Italy.
"Nice one, powerful and good sense of rhythm, It's like 'Last Kiss' with a happy ending, good stuff." -- kavya.
"u mean last kiss the song by pearl jam, i love that song lol :-) thanx for the feedback glad u enjoy'd it :-)....." -- baker.
"*sob* wow thats extremely powerful stuff there, extremely well written, in my opinion you best work ive read." -- Josh / Axey.
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