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TITLE (EDIT)
Littlefish.Comchat |
DESCRIPTION
This is the short story of an online predator,loosely based on real events as seen by me on the news.
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TITLE KEYWORD
Crime |
AUTHOR
Richard W McLin |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I have been writing for a long time, this piece has been one of my most popular pieces.
[February 2007] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
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Littlefish.Comchat
Richard W McLin
The typing was sloppy, and the spelling was incorrect, but that didn't bother me, no it only furthered my excitement. This private chat room was my field, and I knew all the rules, and I also knew how to break them. This little fish would not escape my net. She fell for all the usual tricks,
"Do you like Barbie?"
"Do you ever play house?"
"Have you ever tried kissing?"
They always gave the same reply, "Yes", "Yes", "No", and the third is what I wished to help them with the most. My palms were getting sweaty as I typed, and my fingers began to shake nervously, but I would not let that stop me from my latest hunt. The last one gave me great satisfaction, but we were interrupted, and that would not happen again. I had a new sight, one that was more secluded that the last. Those campers walked in on us during our, joining. This would not happen a second time.
I asked her if she would like to play house in a real house and she typed,
"Yes, but I will have to ask my mom."
So innocent, and yet so naive. How the taste of all that innocence would be exquisite. Then the flow, as I sliced the sharp steel razor quietly, and quickly through her soft, pink neck. The warm flow of her inner essence, that would be the prize, but not after I had my fun.
CRASH
BANG
Noises from down stairs, just my wife spring cleaning I would assume. She loved to clean, but then she was always in her own little world. That bitch was not good for anything but the rich daddy she had, and who left her everything. That was including the cabin I would be using, using on my next little friend. I asked her if she would like to play house with me, and that we should leave me as a surprise to her mother. She replied,
"Why not tell mommy?"
Because I'm gonna fuck and kill you, you stupid little bitch! I screamed in my head. My fingers began quivering again, and I could not control them. I was letting the excitement get a grip on me, I had to calm down, so I didn't blow it. I just simply replied,
"Because later you can introduce me as your new friend. Mommy well be happy to see that you have made an adult friend, and see how mature you are."
She typed a smiley face and I knew I was in. I then typed that we could practice kissing if she wanted, and of course she typed, "I guess." And that was it.
Footsteps running my way. My bitch of a wife probably forgot some swifer mop shit up here and is coming to get it.
BANG
The door, someone has kicked down the door, but who would have known?
"Police, put your hands up and get your face on the ground."
Quickly look at the screen get rid of the evidence.
"Good try motherfucker, I'm a F.B.I agent." Printed on the screen in front of me, there was no little fish, just a stupid cunt from the F.B.I praying on my vulnrabilities. It almost doesn't seem fair.
Richard McLin 2006
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"I had to laugh because it was something I heard on news Where a man though he meet a little six year for sex and turned out to FBI man. Also it reminded me Jennie and Dannie even tho both phycial adults." -- Jeanette.
"Ha ha reminds me of romper room. where they had those cups ya walk on.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA.
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