AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (10) A Hint Of Life (Poetry) Another late night babble... it always seems that when you need to leave the most... you never do. [61 words] A Life Of One (Poetry) What really matters? [2 words] A Rose To You (Poetry) A sense of longing... and ill-timing... [111 words] [Romance] An Ode To The Budded Flower (Poetry) Not all fruit is best when ripe... nor is it what it seems... [28 words] [Humor] Babble (Poetry) Yay for analysis. [23 words] Control (Poetry) A past relationship. [44 words] Jaded Time (Poetry) Lonely evenings and a flickering computer screen make for some interesting thoughts... [95 words] Malice. (Poetry) Don't blink. [22 words] Straight And Narrow. (Poetry) A metaphor of life? A late night babble... [109 words] The Unshed Tear (Poetry) Confusion runs rampant. [73 words]
Slipping Brandon Cummins
Picture of a photograph
a still shot of time
an outside perspective
of a problem inside
look at the smiling faces
happy yet demure
if only it showed
just how things really were
just keep it in mind
since that time is long gone
you must
Consider now
that time is forgotten
for some but not all
onto bigger and better
it's time to let go
If it's too hard to do
too hard to say
it's never too late
to throw yourself back
just remember
I won't be there to catch you
if you fall my way.
Now is the end
Maturity's an issue
something we just can't contend
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"I think this would make good song lyrics...with the "if it's too hard to say"..."If you fall my way" whole section as the chorus....just an idea...i like this one a lot too...maybe more than the last one i said was my favorite =)" -- stephanie.
""Picture a photograph" would make more sense than a picture of a photograph. I`ve read most of your poems now, and think they`re OK, but am starting to be frustrated by your inconsistent use of punctuation and capitals. These things not only help the reader, but can add to the meaning. Sorry if that sounds pedantic." -- Peter Rivendell.
"I think that Stephanie is right. This would be an awesome song. I love it!!! " -- Melissa Gauthier, picayune , ms, united states.
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