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"The story taps into the feelings of estrangement and loneliness that many of us experience in school. The piece is overloaded with dialogue, however: I would suggest narrating more of the story and including only a few key things that people said to you, things that struck home. Two minor notes: 1) while Runequest is a good game, its inclusion in this piece did not have a clear purpose to me, and 2) your uncle suddenly changed into your dad in the final scene with the bully. Should an adult be depicted as beating up a middle school youth and then walking away with impunity?" -- David Bareford.
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